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person HallowsEve
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was smiling the whole story really loving it, till the last line and really started crying. why did he leave? so do i have this right everyone things he is marrying Claudia (which he ia at the moment) and the pod is just "family" none knows hes gay?
person Rosei
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Chapter 10

These two really are in love. They are so sweet together.
I forget that they're so bound to one another because they're
so kink-a-fied. ( Not a real word or even a decent spelling
of a fake word. Sorry.)

Thanks! (Can't wait to see what you come up with for Azreal's "talent".)
person Brittany
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i love it already im just stopping by to say update and work out the kinks in the story or else!!! thanx again though
person k
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Azrael putting on a show - that's going to be fun. Azrael doubting himself makes him even more adorable. In comparison to his brothers, who had a life as humans before turning into vampires, he is still a 'toddler'. I hope the brothers realize he needs a little more attention. X was always looking out for Sex in his own ways and Sex was never one to be self centered but they tend to forget about little brother. I hope they will do the same for him as he did in Tokio for Sex - making him stand on his own, even if he doesn't want to. If he wants another day with Puppy, he should do a little paper work too or dealing with Hades so that the brothers don't need to (I still think they would made good friends. Everyone beware, if they gang up.
Please let X teach Azrael to use the healing light - even if it wasn't meant that way, I always get the impression Sex or X [since you stated X punishing Az for being to enthusiastic with Marcus) wake up to dealing with the effects of Azrael's nightly activities. I hope Sex won't get mad at him realizing his locket gone. He surely freaks out missing it.
Why is Claudius more strict with Azrael? Sure, he smacks X and Sex when they deserve it but around Azrael Claudius seems a more severe but maybe that's only my imagination.
With every chapter I like Claudia more. She will make such a fine empress and I hope she will purchase Azrael by auction - would be fun. Nobody embarrasses Claudius' daughter!

Loved this chapter! Thank you again for this jewel!
person Laur
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOOH intriguing. Oh the locket!!!! NO
person Spirit
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Have I lately mentioned how much I love your endings to the chapters? Congrats by the way, on reaching 100. And Claudius has a right to be livid... at least, the fact that Azrael took the blame makes it...easier in a way, since Sex is in the same body.. oh jeez.. and what talent does he have in mind? Can't wait to read that next week when I get back from holiday!!

xxSpirit
person meadowspeak
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Azreal. I felt sorry for him before but u just made it worse. Why does he have to be the third wheel? I felt like crying this chapter. His brothers need to give him more time. then they wont be to freaking tired all the time. its seven days in the week for crying out loud. and three of them. im sure they can make better arrangements than 5/1/1. then they wont be so tired and Azreal can learn how to heal. god knows he needs that, desperately.
meadow
person Jenna T.
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10 - Oh my. Trouble in paradise for Honeybee and the little lamb. Marcus topping Azrael is growing on me...slowly. But it's still cute.
person a.taste.of.insanity
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw. I feel so bad for Azrael. Now he's getting blamed for everything. But I love the poor guy. *pets Az* .. Haha, I mean Azrael.

I wonder what his talent will be..

Update soon?
person Cindyip
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's sweet of Az to take the blame, poor Az is in for it(^_^)