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schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!!! i liked the way how Alarik died....and the way the building exploded!! oh what about the other vampire Bretta or whatever her name is? is she still after the brothers? and what about that one family that tried to "help" X?
person k
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sighing in relief. Claudius is safe for now. You made me happy! Black and White - they are like two sides of the same story. Liam will have a lot to explain to Hades ... maybe not, it's rather clear. I still prefer Hades over him but through giving birth to Claudius Liam moves up in my 'liking', though I wouldn't be too surprized if he had his hands in the antidote-thing in the beginning, maybe founded Orel Wessel. I hope he's stuck with William for a long time, so that he learns to communicate with his lover/family and trust anyone beside himself and his damn plotting. How come that the uber-vampire has so less trust in everybody, especially Hades?

How will Claudius call Liam now? I can't imagine him adressing Liam as father.

Wing-envy, that's so cool and sweet. Poor Marcus/Armor - everybody gets an update but him. The big vamp hopefully has now a big enough ego to stand it. Poor Vlad - he will never get a real chance to challenge Claudius for Sex but I admit, he is mated with the top of the top of hottest men ever.

Have a nice break! LY for writing this stories and thank you for sharing! Good luck!
person Ciar
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...O___O;;;;; You almost killed me. I really thought Claudius was going to die. I sat there thinking "I'm never ever going to read anything from her ever again. Never... But wait, he's alive, YES! I love you!" XD
It's good that I'm alone at home right now.
Looking forward to the next book.
person a.taste.of.insanity
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just a few paragraphs before the actual change, I KNEW Claudius was going to sprout wings.

So I skipped those few paragraphs to make sure my instincts were correct.

So Claudius' blue gene got awakened? I'm a little dumb-brained about it.. since I don't get how breaking the shield will result in a rebirthing, but hey, it's nearly 3 in the morning...

Father turned and caught my by my throat. “You do not interfere. This is something that I should have dealt with 300 hundred years ago.”

I think you meant 300 years ago instead of 300 hundred years ago.. for that would make it 30,000 years ago.

This chapters was so freaking suspenseful, I held my breath for half of it. (Respirator, respirator, where the fuck are you?)

Epilogue.. I can't wait for it. And you've earned yourself a nice break! I hope you enjoy it!
person a.taste.of.insanity
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And I'm surprised Claudius had so much control in him. I mean, it's Claudius, duh.. but still, X/Sex/whoeverthefuckitwasatthemoment went into a crazy bloodlust when his wings sprouted, and he didn't engage in battle before that either.

Claudius amazes me.

And Sex shouldn't be envious of Claudius' wings, since they do have to be bigger so Claudius could fly. Blame the Brothers for being short - therefore having a smaller wingspan.
person a.taste.of.insanity
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and because you didn't mention the meaning of your chapter title, I Googled it.

So apparently it means, "Night Music"?

Hmm, pretty.
person k
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Nachtmusik" - I didn't realize that earlier. Cool chapter title. Sounds supiciously like Venom's album "Eine kleine Nachtmusik" (Mozart is just not fitting).

Does the wings always have the same color as the hair of the bearer? In that case Hades can be glad he's not a blue - he'd look like a gigantic duckling.

Thanks again for sharing and enjoy your brake to the fullest!
person AsyenMarI
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW CLAUDIUS WAS ROYALTY!!!!!!!!
Amazing ending to Caramel, absolutely amazing. I loved it!

*sigh* It's good to be Queen...

Asyen
person LAUR
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was freaking awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!

So why was Hades so upset....wait was Liam Claudius's father? Oh man this chappie was awesome. I can't wait to see what happens in the epilogue. Kixx you deserve a break. You did great. Man...I hope the lycan are okay and i cant wait for the females of the pack to arrive and the wedding and the births and everything. Waiting on edge for Cloves and the epilogue. OOOH MAN!
person Cindyip
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So Claudius now is all winged too:)