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Ahhh! That was a mean ending! You are an awesome, awesome writer =P Anyways i just have one quick question.... since the end of cinnamon and the beginning of caramel, Xavier doesn't need to seem to burn anymore. Did i miss a solution to that or has it just not been important enough to mention?

p.s keep up the excellent work =D

Wow, you update quick lol. Why are they mad at him? Is it because they knew it wasnt his talent? Why didnt the crowd cheer immediately? Did they know, or was it just amazingly good? Im confused, I love this story tooo much :). I blink and there's an update, muchly apperciated.

good,good~nods head~ by the time i post this and read the other reviews ppl have already asked the questions so...~shrug~ oh i earned you a couple of fans by the way :)

Chapter 11 Prelude

Oh my God!!!! What did he do?!!
Why was Marcus sooo upset??!!!
Why is Claudius ready to kill?!!
What's happening? What's going on?!
Why, why, why!!!!

Great scene!!
Thanks!
R

“Can’t pull the wool over your eyes." LOL.... Baaaah

Sad ending to this one :(

Where is Marcus?! That sounds nothing at all like the gentle musician. Sounds like Tonya... I feel sorry for Marcus, he couldn't teach Azrael the chello from the beginning. The two truly have a lot of talking ahead - maybe learning to talk first.
Claudius is scary when he's angry. I absolutely adore him.
I don't know what to make of Claudia's parents - yeah they want to protect their daughter and give advice to X but I really don't like the way they handle things. What did Claude think? How would Claudia benefit from being the one and only in X's life? If he even considered tossing his mates out his lovelife for the moment of an eye blink, she wouldn't give him a second glance. BTW how old id Claudia?
Do the Whitecombes hold a grudge against Hades? Well, everybody seems to hate him and it's not fair. Besides, X has Claudius - who would be better suited to give him guidance in regard of Hades.

May I ask again when the girls arrive in the house? I so hope Haru-chan will find happyness in America, maybe with Riot. I miss him and I would love to see Tommy around the boys again. It's like he was furniture (like Billy before blending with Liam). Of course they are just side characters but you make them all appear so nice and real that it's sad to not know how they are doing.

Thank you for this chapter, I'll be waiting like always for the next as a devoted fan. Go on!

OH MAN AZ!!!
He cant seemt o get anything right all the time. Well at least he gets along with Claudia some. Okay why is everyone angry at the end?

Where did Marcus go? T_T

this a review for cahps 99 and 100 cause i didnt get a chance to do it before. i swear you be throughing us some curve balls in every chapter for ex. hades and liams little cosplay in X's front office was hilarious. but quick guestion though what was it that surprised liam so much in the elivator did X do something or was it hades. and the hole picnic in the office was so sweet. but poor Az waking up cramps and then ends up braking sex's chain im surprisedhe wasn't killed by claudius he was so pissed. as always great chaps and can't wait to see what Az does for a tallent and if he is bought by Marcus and not someone else.

Chapter 11 - I think I missed something. Damn. Writing a paragraph of an Ec paper and then reading some of your story and then going back to the Ec paper does not work. Oh well. I'll have to come back after I finish.