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oh wow please resist
need more as per usual u r a genius
anyway the other day i drew a pic of sex would u mind if i stuck it in my deviant art gallery if u want ill send u a link when i put it up if u dont want me too i dont mind its not great its just how he looks in my head anyway feel free to say no

Please bring Marcus back in to the fold hes part of the pod. He is twisted in his logic and his notion of love but you have made me care for him dam it. lol. I am just really glad hes not done anything stupid. Thank you for a well thought out story

Ok i'm appeased now... I may not like MArcus as much as Armor or Claudius but damned if i wanted him gone. And the Laseng as Azrael's flaw does make sense........ and that was kinda hot =P Aynwayz Azrael and Marcus had better get back together at somepoint or i will threaten you with my spork... fear the wrath of the spork! =P

Another chappie... I thought the name Lanseng sounded familiar in the beginning of the chapter, though I did not recognise the description of him. I was about halfway through and hoping I wouldn't have to read both Cake and Cinnamon all over again just to find out who he was, but in the end my memory wasn't as faulty as I thought it was.

Sad beginning, but I had been expecting that, the ending was kind of unexpected. I wanna see more of Lanseng.

your story gets better everytime i read it. I would ask like to ask who is "Lanseng" i am sorry but of the top of my head, and i can't wait to see what this will do to the pod.

*drools* *is unable to maintain decent thought* *slaps self* oh god....that was hot....more please.

this just keeps getting better and better. thank you for the quick updates. i'm looking forward to reading more of this story

Woo!I can't wait for the next chapter, this whole affair thing is really getting me interesting. What can I say I'm an angst lover. Good job, I really liked this chapter, even though I wasn't really too into the Marcus and Azreal thing...but I think I am now!

Oh I am sooo happy I kept reading! I feel horrible for poor marcus. But he must have seen this coming. I hope this isnt the end of it, I mean marcus is just so damn cute! He just needs punishment! Oh I cant wait for the next chapter! I love your stories! -drools-

Hi! Sorry for being absent for so long, but I've been sick. I spent my holidays trying to keep my food down. I feel fine now though, so I've been catching up on the updates. I'm happy to see that there's going to be more of Langseng. I remember I had a thing for him when he first showed up. That blue hair, those red eyes....
*Ahem* At any rate it seems like Marcus is in for it big time. Cant say I feel sorry for him yet, but I think I will be quite soon.
One other thing; I have trouble remembering what happened earlier, that made Marcus shut Azrael out the first time. There was something about a shower right..? Somewhere where Azrael is saying "This cant be happening again." I think you could, perhaps, put in some reference to that scene.