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sorry i haven't updated in a long ass time i've just been so busutery and every thing and then my computer started acting up but enough of my excuses. chaps 101 - 104were great and in 104 you did make me cry and thats a hard thing to do. and i think your right about marcus having to grow up and as haley called him lanny is going to be great for Az i can feell it. and that fight seen with the lycan was great like all the other fight seens. and the limo ride and that sex seen between Az and Lanny was hot, very nice. and the up comign thing between Az and Britta, i can't wait i'm so anxious. as always you keep us on our toes. XD

He cried! I knew that was coming... after all Azrael is another facet of Xavier. I also think this fight between Marcus and Azrael was a long time coming cause it's true, Marcus walks all over Azrael and everybody else for that matter. Oh and good job on the evil evil cliffy =P

Chapter 4 - Haley penguining is cute. But I still need to find the tissue box.

yay loved it as always

So sorry about not reviewing, but I assure you I'm reading! First chance in a couple of days to get on, but it was so worth the wait to read your updates. I still don't get the whole 'Carmel' thing...

Of course there are drawbacks to fucking a Seer, there are drawbacks to everything.. Great chapters!!! Got back from holiday and had three waiting for me, yummy! And Lanseng's explanation as to why Marcus just left is just so right. Isn't it kinda harsh to bring in another lover as a flaw though? Then again, because of the mind-walking, there can't really be any other flaw.. So, the pod is growing? Is Lanseng going to move in with them? Oh and I think Ping should arrive earlier than Thursday because I love her interaction with Haley :P. And when is Claudia due for the girls? Do her parents even know? (refering to chapt. 12, where her mom gasps 'pregnant?')

Looking forward to chapter 14!!
Excellent writing!

~Spiritxx

Chapter 12 - I think a OMGOMGOMGOMG is appropiate at this time. OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG. Holy fuck. He...he's...oh my god. I don't know what to feel any more! I feel bad for Marcus but I also feel bad for Az. And I feel bad for Lanseng because he's sexy. But then I want Az and Lanseng to fuck. But then I don't because poor Marcus. But Marcus makes me mad because he left for no reason. And I also feel bad for X/Sex/Az's body. The constant fucking. When are they going to pass out from over exertion? Those poor wanton vampire sluts. And their slutty boyfriends/husbands/casual fuck..s. But I love them all. To death.

Anyway, good news. I didn't miss anything in 11. I'm just retarded. Yay!

"It was like he was a predator disguised as the family housecat. Pet me, love me. Bite and scratch. Sorry, rub rub rub, foregive me, I’ll be good -- go for the jugular."

Reminds me of my cat. And, once again, my keyboard is covered in Root Beer because of you.

Chapter 13 - Wow. Extremely fucking hot. Oh God. I feel bad for saying that. I feel loyal to Marcus even though, at first, I didn't like him and then I hated him but then I felt sorry for him.

Poor Lanseng. He says that he knows Marcus is first in Az's...shared heart but he's going to fall for Az. Hard. And then get his heart stomped on when Marcus comes back with an attitude adjustment. Well, I think so. I'm probably wrong. You tend to always surprise me. BUT Lanseng does have kind of a clone-ish personality. Maybe he'll fall in love with Marcus when Marcus 'dominates' him. Haha.

No, I really dont hate Az's Puppy, I love him with all my heart. If anything ever happened to him I'd cry, he really is a little puppy. I little baby. I like Lanseng, he seems nice but I feel bad for Marcus when he finds out. Im gonna feel bad for Lanseng too when Marcus dominates him lol! I hope he's not to rough, considering he just lost his virginity. But I dont want Marcus to change, I like him just the way he is. I wouldnt mind though if he changed a littl bit, but thats all I can handle lol. Great chapter, update soon please!!!

i still dont get why marcus left...explain how az is so perfect. and why did he just up and pick lanseng out of the blue and slept with him to ease his heartache?? explain please but other than that i love caramel so far