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schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the shower!!!!!!!very much!!
person sesshoumarunaraku
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well that is one why to learn verry fast!!!!!!
person sesshoumarunaraku
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok so Marcus left because A minde walked and he din't learn on his own???? May be my memory had gone bye,bye but i don't remember when Marcus left A alone for the first time. Could you please tell me!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!
person sesshoumarunaraku
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Claudius wants to punishe A because of the medalion????? Why it is not his fault!!!!!! (my crying).Any way love the new dog!!!!!
person sesshoumarunaraku
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok there is one thing i don't understand about Britta. what happen at the Council??? you know right after she sent someone to talk to Hades, it was suposes, for Britta's ambasador to appear before to Council.WHAT HAPPEN HAD THE COUNCIL NOT TAKE PLACE BECAUSE SEX HAD TO LEAVE TO ANOTHER COUNTRY???WHAT HAPPEN?????COULD YOU PLEASE TELL ME I AM DIEING OF CURIOSITY!!!!!PLEASE TELL ME I AM BEGGING YOU!!!!!!
person SODA
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Azreal! Stupid Marcus! I almost cried, I was thinking about the break up between me and my man, and I almost bawled. Never thought I'd cry when I was the dumper, not the dumpee. Oh well, they'er not worth our tears. I still love that stupid Marcus, I hope they'll eventually be together. Great chapter, update soon please!!!!
person Mya416
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yosha! Ok seriously, sorry I've been lowsy about reviewing. (Compy is fixed as of roughly 9 pm tonight! WEE!) Anyways, I am so sad!!! I can see the point of Marcus needing to be "growing up" but can't they do it together? Whooo....*sobs* Ok awesome chapter but I feel gut punched over the kind of anguish that both Az and Marcus are going through.
person Spirit
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh.. oh the ache of the separation. You had me so close to tears myself. They're right. Marcus does need to grow up, but to leave him... oh. And I feel sorry for Claudius and Sex, that they can't have their full day. Though couldn't something be worked out so that SAX can have like, a equal (or near equal) amout of days out? I mean, that'd be only fair...right? And how's Claudia coming along? I mean I know she's not a huge character, but she is pregnant.. oh and the war is coming up.. Are the twins going to be born in turmoil? And yay! Haley's back! Goddess I love the Lycan! More so when Ping's around because it's just so much mmore entertaining! =)

Sorry to hear you lost $40 but, at least, did you have fun? That's the important bit I suppose, as long as you don't lose too much :P

Great writing, keep it up! xxSpirit
person Cindyip
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like Marcus, crazy and all. I hope that Lanseng fixes him so that Az can get him backT_T
person k
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Azrael. Thank you so much for drawing out his character more and make him stand on his own. Special thanks for letting him cry - you know I think he needs tears and another big thanks for finally letting Claudius realize his different treatment of the brothers. I got a little worried about the remark that 'Marcus can be more than Armor'. Maybe it's because Marcus is not my favorite character but that is somehow not my liking. Armor can grow too and I really don't want X with Amor being weaker than Marcus. Too much distress - he would have to fear Marcus overpowering Armor when some hardship comes their way. I want them balanced - just like the brothers but that's entirely my opinion and doesn't need to bother you. For the next chapter - KICK BRITTA'S HAIRY ASS and than let Sex play with Claudius while X cares for Azrael in the dark...

Thank you for this chapter and get better soon (I know from personal experience that acupressure hurts a hell of a lot. I felt like my brain jumped out of my head right into the roof and it remained their for several days.)!