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I thought Sex did grow to like Marcus after the incident with Hades. But how did Marcus walk back in, I thought Lanny was watching him.(^_^)

hey its Brittany. omg i fucking love it~pardon the language~ thanks for the tips it helps alot

oh and ditto what rosemary said

Damn...i just hella crap and my computer froze and i forgot what i wrote. It blanked it all out.

I was saying something like I like Sex all upset. It completes all his emotions. Um do Armor and Marcus talk like Sex/X/Az do? I hope that X's mum is alright. Also ooooh yea. Shayne is severly cool like mega cool!!!!! Yea i get sex and Claudius....Now we need some more Claudia. too many characters to juggle. Okay KUDOS im out!

Quick Question:

Okay if something happens between the bloods they all go before a board and that board decides what to do?

Tell me, this wasn't the second chapter in a row that made me cry... was it? Oh gosh. I'll probably die from dehydration at this rate.. but, damn, I still love it. You could tell how much Azrael was bleeding in this chapter.. Shayne was sweet, in her own way.. and Sex just pwned. I love Sex. .. oh, uh, not like that.

Btw, I know I'm so late with this question, since it goes all the way back to Cake.. but I never understood why Armour left that time.. after X proposed to him. (and X called out for Trisha in his sleep).. I mean, Marcus said that he "dropped his Armour and he couldn't find him". But why did Armour disappear? When he came back a few chapters later, it seemed he meant to.. but I thought Armour loved X? Why did he go willingly?

I'm so confused.. Ah..

Will you ever cease to make us cry?
I hope not but now I wonder how X and Armor will deal with the situation. Not to mention Claudius - he is after all still Marcus father. Marcus can join the 'not on my list of favorite persons'-club and I'm positive now the boys need a therapist. I consider it cruel to have Azrael say he can drop back to 14. After all this was an enormous sacrifice from Marcus, he has not done everything wrong.
Where will Marcus go? Will he have Lanseng help him?
He must have realized Lanseng understands Azrael good enough to help him become the person Azrael needs. Sometimes I think it would be the ultimate statement of Marcus' love for Azrael if he re-merged with Armor and left him his mindfucking-ability (but not the music) and thus recreated a complete and mentally strong Nr. 2. Then I think 'Azrael can't do without Marcus' and I want Marcus to grow and learn what love is and face the question whom he's really in love with.

What to think of Sex in this chapter?
Please tell me why Sex makes Marcus think he would hate him with a passion? He can't really hate him because he is concerned for him going to cry. Sex truly is the caretaker for his younger brothers but Marcus is his brother too and Marcus was right in Cinnamon, when he stated that he never harmed Sex. Armor had done far worse to Sex and Xavier but he is still welcome and Sex seems to come along well with him. Wouldn't he help Azrael better if he talked to Marcus and made him face the emotional effects of his doings on little brother? He wouldn't even have to be friendly. Right now he is more strict with Marcus than with Hades (whom btw I miss).

A little of topic but what does X right now? He has the caretaker-side too and I don't want him to leave that entirely to Sex.

Shayne as a sister in law. She would organize Claudia a baby-party and handing her nicely wrapped babysuits and baby-guns. She is cool.

Lovely chapter!

Oh, ok, now I get it. At first I thought that someone's flavor was gonna change (other than Billiam's turning) and I was gonna freak out a little. Now, I'm good. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I think he should whine about it later or at least admit he was a bit hasty in sleeping with the seer, you know a little remorse to go with that western sandwich. hey by the way when is ping coming into the picture? im anxious to see how cute the puppies are going to be. off topic but...can you give me some pointers on writing a story; settings pov that sort of thing. i recently created an account so yeah. :D

Chapter 14 Tired

Great chapter... very heart wrenching
and yet, you insert your great sense of
humor throughout. I loved everything about it.

Thank you!
R

My eyes teared up in this chapter. Gosh.. I've always adored Azrael.. Now I love him even more. And go Haley! He was so cute.