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*returns from nowhere*

Oh my. So much has transpired. I just wanna cry, but the tears just won't flow. Azreal and Marcus weren't my favorites, however this little rut that they are in so sucks. Geez, Sex's actions and words there at the left me reeling. *sigh* I am so caught in a state of ambivalence. I hold no grudge against Lanseng, from what it SEEMS he is trying to be helpful. And in other news... the whole Lycan issue. Looking forward to how all this will be dealt with. Bottom line, the chapters have been great. It was cool to have another Shanye cameo. By the way, where is Shade? As far as I can recall she is still around, right?

i think Sex was absolutely perfect don't you dare change a damn thing about how he reacted no matter what anybody says. sooooooo whats going to happen now? i mean we haven't even heard what's X's feeling on this we just know that Sex is pissed off beyond belief. and what about Amor how are things going to work out between him and X. will Marcus be an ass again and not let him out just to spite or will he have the shit beet out of him again so many questions its making my head hert. can't wait for the next chap. XD

Thanks for clearing up the 'Caramel' bit. I got it now :D

Chapter 15 - Fuck. I feel like Marcus deserved it but then I also feel like going: 'Nooo, poor Marcus. Love him because he's so fucked up'. Seriously, though, my mixed feelings about Marcus are worse than when Hades was raping Sex. Anyway, after reading your writing tips rant, it's obvious that you don't have a specific writing method. Which means that it's a miracle that your writing is so wonderful! And that, my dear, must mean that you have pure unadulterated talent. Okay. I don't think miracle was the right word, but whatever.

Sex cracks me up, its so sad and dramatic and all he thinks is that his carpet is stained! I was so sad, than I started cracking up laughing at the end, all because of Sex lol. He's hilarious. This is another funny part.

“Has to get….OHMYGOD! She’s got balls.”

/Your Female Alpha is male?/ -Haley's a nut! I love him sooooo much!

Anyways, poor Azreal. I wanna kill that monkey right now, even if I do still love him. Great chapter, update soon please!!!

"that bastard left bloodstains on the carpet" - Go Sex!

Been away again and read two chapters at once, I have to say that the emotial roller-coaster is really working hard at the moment.

It was nice to get some more info on X's parents and family again.

More Lansang and Claudius! Please?

Ok. I'm proud of sex right now... he's still impetuous but his actions have more meaning now. I like the twist of Shayne becoming Lady Regent as well, although it's sad that Xaviers mother is in the hospital. It makes me wonder what twists are coming up, especially because even as Sahyne herself said in this chapter, she doesn't get along with Lycans. My guess is that fluffy and bouncy pups will change her mind eventually =P

Oh My Goddess.... So Azrael and Marcus are...done? Sex was wayyy intense there at the end, go him for sticking up! So of course Armor's still gonna be around.. but wont it hurt Azrael to see the body of his former husband/lover? Granted it's not the same persona, but... Idk. It would upset me. Great writing, I love how you brought Shayne and the Hunters back in. Thanks for the clear-up about Claudia. And I do like Sex in this chappie. Demonstrating true brotherly love (if that makes sense).
Looking forward to more!!! :D

~Spiritxx

Chapter 105: Little Brother; Big Sister

Whoa~ Sex gets his fury on.
Nice to see the sibling banter and that
Azrael finally gets some down time, that
boy has been through alot!

Thanks for the explanations, I find I need them
too sometimes!
R

wandered???? i was out of the town and when i came back i found to my surprise that Caremel had already began. i had to read every chapter a review after i read it.Poor x any more feathers gone and he will look like a plucked chicken.

Any way i have to thank you. Reading your stories and another story i got an idea for my first original story. The angel wings did it. Well the characters belong to Crying_Angel_Yue, but i accepted the Challenge the ideas are mine. I usualy do Amine fictions, but more on fanfiction, then here.

Any way love love it!!!! update soon!!!!! PLEASE!!!! i am mad at myself i still can't remember when Marcus left A. alone for the first time.