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SHIT. Holy fucking shit. Part 1 and the first half of Part 2 was so happy, it made me smile, and I almost cried in happiness.

But you had to toss this in.. and oh my fucking God. NO! Alexander?! No no no no no no no no.

Question: Isn't X still the Head of Von Drachenfeld?

.. And.. even though Britta had named Claudius/Alexander Blood Emperor.. that doesn't necessarily mean he will be Emperor.

WHY! Why did Alexander have to appear? Oh fuck. Oh holy fuck.

And what about everyone else? What about the safety of everyone else?! Claudia. Oh my God. What about Claudia? X's family. The Hellcats. And the Imperial Pack swore their loyalty to X. Wait.. no.. they swore loyalty to the Blood Emperor. But they're branded with the Von Drachenfeld shield.

Oh my god. I might hyperventilate. And who knows how long it will take for me to find the answers to these questions.

Chapter 47 "Nachtmusik"

And to think that he hasn't EVEN gotten married yet!!

Very engrossing chapter. I love that he had a twinge
of jealousy over Claudius' wing size. HA!
" I had wing envy. His were almost twice the size of mine."

Gruesome action.(I knew you had it in you.)
"then there was nothing but wet thunks of chunks landing around us."
Alarik met a fitting end.
Very intense! You had me on the edge of my seat!

Thank you Kiix and have a great vacation!

Thanks,
R

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cladius has wing now!! i wish there was so way we cold see what they all look like. yaaayyyy alerik is dead and cladius is free of his bone shield. and poor Sex lost his kitty for now but not forever and thats good. the hole thing was amasing. and that hole thing with the soul was cool. cna't wait for the next chap. oh i just remembered X never asked Liam about the hole glow ing thing he sees when hes looking at the girlsand what that about or is that just another way of seeing there souls insted of riddons.

and another thing i just remembered you remember in the begining you said cladius wasn't going to be anything special i guess you changed your mind about that one hah. now he's one of the three major characters. and question how come hades hit liam when he saw cladius with wingsdid he think he cheated on him a long time ago?

Chapter 44 - OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! What a great fucking ending. Oh my God. Where is Claudius? He better be close. Oh my God. I need five minutes.

Okay. Alright

ANYWAYS...

I am so happy because I FINALLY got something right in this story. I said a while ago that Armor was going to get all insecure when the babies come (although, they're not here yet) and I right! I feel so...proud. And I'm your 700th reviewer!

This part just...killed me:

I leaned back against my big monkey. “Sex’s girlfriend has stopped by for a visit.”

“Does Father know about this?”

“She’s twelve.”

“Lolita complex?” Liam inquired.

“No. And you are not the one to be talking about a Lolita complex.”

“I waited till his balls dropped.”

Chapter 45 - Oh God. Your story is so bipolar. It's this giant wave of euphoria, depression, euphoria, mild depression, euphoria, and then it's all normal because it got some lithium. I HALF-cried when Hades said that he'd die for X. That is so...god. I love you. AND have I ever said that I love your story? I mean, the PLOT not the story. I mean I love the story too but what I'm TRYING to say is that I love how you sort of...weave things together you know? And like...yeah. It's so...interesting and your characters are so fucking real. You delve deep into their emotions, you know? Which most people seem to fail at. You make us CARE if someone gets killed or if someone's hurt, missing, in danger, etc. Not just the main characters. Pretty much every character. If Alarik got hurt you COULD make me cry over him. Haha. I'm sure you've heard this 1000000+ times before. Not the Alarik thing but yeah. Yeah. OH! I cannot believe you made Julian a bad guy. Haha. That is the last time I tell you to name someone something. Oh well. I hope he's like one of those characters that is bad but he's being brainwashed so he ends up saving the day somehow. That would be great. OH! He probably is because Alarik's group resembles white supremisists (I did not spell that right at all). Well, actually, they remind me more of the people that hate interracial...what do you call it? Mixing? Breeding sounds too animalistic. Too Lycan. ANYWAYS, I'm rambling. I'll stop here. Did I mention that I giggled, insanely, when they got their Hellcats? No? Good.

Chapter 46 - Even though you made Julian a bad character, gave him no redeeming qualities, and killed him off instantly; I am still going to give you some names to use if you want because I'm a loyal fan and I love you unconditionally. That sounded like a bad pick-up line but here...

Girl:
Isako - the sand child (Japanese)
Kali - time; black (Sanskrit)
Amara - unfading; eternal (Greek)
Alianor - pity (Greek)

Boy:
Dalziel - white field (Gaelic)
Ian - I think it's a form of John and John means god is gracious so..(Hebrew)
Arian - silver (Welsh)
Lucien - light (Latin)

Aww. You can name a boy Arian Lucien. Silver light.

Chapter 47 - I didn't believe that he was dead for a second. Not even for a SECOND. But that's just because book 4 is called Cloves. If it wasn't...I'd probably believe he died. Oh my God. Book FOUR. Jesus. That is crazy. How many books are you going to have? And when you finish them will you do spin-offs with other characters? Like...the kids? Or you don't know? I bet you don't know. Because you said you just sort of go with the wind on these things. Well, not really but you said something like that.

thank god you didn't kill claudius off, and big black wings! how cool is that!!!

can't wait for the epilogue! i really enjoyed it!

i want more!!

i have a couple of names.

azura
xanthia
aoren
ednyn
yara
xelos

how exilerating! i must say, i was quite surprised when Claudius ended up being a royal! It's way funny that his wings are bigger. but why are they black? ... wait dont' answer that. never mind. ooooh, I just LOVE this story! it has to be one of the bestestes out there!