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person k
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry but Azrael mentioned the locket to Sex in chapter 13, he just never mentioned Claudius taking it but wouldn't it be natural that Sex knew this as well as he knew about Marcus trying to ease Azrael's pain? Sometimes it confuses me what the brothers are supposed to know and what not (if not especially mentioned).

quote, ' /He was angry enough at me today. I didn’t mean to break your chain./

/Marcus was frantic to ease your pain. That is the way love should be. If easing his pain is you taking, as you said, another dog…then do it. I personally would never consider you perfection, little brother./ ' unquote

Hope you had a good sleep and have a wonderful week!
person Miharaz
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lmao! Somehow that was the perfect ending. I loved the Claudius dancing scene... that was hot. I also don't think i'll ever stop laughing every time i think of sex lying on the floor looking ravished but with his hair glued to the carpet =P
person Jenna T.
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18 - For a second there, I forgot that they were at a photoshoot. I thought Claudius was just strutting around like a cat at home. And then when William and Hades came I was like OH! Although, they could of came when they were at home. Alright. That had an innuendo. I know it did. I can't even remember life without Hades and Billiam. It sounds depressing though.
person SODA
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I missed out. Dont worry, one of yor loyal has not vanished. I missed those two. They'er so fucking goooood to eachother. Love it! Great chapter, update soon please!!!!!
person Sforza
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!(x7)

I would have reviewed this morning if I wasn't in such a rush. That sure brought me out of my melancholy for a while. I was all giggles. Claudius and Sex are so hot!

I love strawberry pocky too! Wish I could actually, send you some!
Ah! Good luck with your submission of Cake to a publisher. *spirit fingers*

^_^
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yaaayyyy nightshades back in the picture and i almost forgot about the locket, when sex finds out how it got broken there will be some hell to pay and marcus will be in some more hot water. and those pics are going to be hot arent they i wish there was some way someone out there could draw exactly what they would look like as they are in your minds eye for every one to see. and will sex be using his wing in the pic cause that would be so hot. but as always cant wait for the next chap.
person a.taste.of.insanity
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter so much, I moved my cursor to click on 'Next Chapter' only to realize there was no next chapter! Oh, I felt disappointed at that.

I'm so excited to see another photoshoot.. I love the photoshoots you know? Somehow, I do.

And, I feel honoured to have a (x2) beside my name, for commenting twice. If I get special numbers next to my name - heck, I'd comment again and again.. and again.

I remember thinking about the photoshoot, and hoping for something to happen. I forgot what it was.. I'll get back to you on that.
person a.taste.of.insanity
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PS: It looks as if Sex is being compared to a horse quite... often. (Earlier by Liam, and now by Claudius) Hmm.. is that supposed to mean something? Or am I just reading too much into it?

I think they should go clubbing again. They're so hot when they go clubbing.

I still don't remember what I was going to say.. about the photoshoot.

.. Oh, one thing: I reaaalllyyyy hope Sex uses his feathers. It would be SO pretty! Angel Sex + Kitty Sasha.

Awwwww.
person Rosei
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17

I enjoy the whole lead up to these press/photo shoots.
Lots of opportunity for fun! Sex and Claudius make me laugh!
(So do Ancients.)
Can't wait till Sex finds out what happened to his locket!
That should be interesting!
Thanks,
R
person Jenna T.
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16 - Glad you liked my ass kissing! And speaking of ass kissing and giggling, the line: 'hellcat groupies' made me laugh. Hard. And, god, who would of guessed that Sex would have this giant role at the beginning of the story? I sure didn't. Speaking of sex, Sex hasn't been his overly horny self lately. The only one that's been overly horny lately was, well, Xavi. With the threesome and the threesome phone sex thing. Anyways, what I'm saying is that Sex and Sasha need some alone time together.