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well.....
I can't wait till the next chapter.
I really love the last 2 chapters it felt right. I love the way you right i am glad they got some time together and got to work out some stuff that must have been there from the start before shit hit the fan again. I vote that Azrael do some dominating he is good at it.I love what you write and find that your books are like a geeks drug can never get too much only want more.
-HallowsEve

Earssssssss

EWWWWWW...he has to dominate the wholeeeee back!!!! EWWWW. His ** going to fall off.

Claudius and SEX are soo hot...cant wait for more chapters.

Nice...I love this story! I actually never liked M gomen! I love Armor though...je ne!

THAT WAS HOTTT I LOVE SEX AND CLAUDIUS!!!!

His poor head is stuck to that carpet!!! I cant wait for what the suprise is that Ping has....update soon!

Chapter 18 Smutty Pictures

What great fun! I love those photo shoots!!
That's one of the places that Sex and Claudius
first teased one another... (wasnt' it)
I'll go back and find out. Loved the humor,
and Haley's excitement over the coming arrival
in Ping...
Thanks!
R

Yes! I was so happy about this chapter. I LOVED IT. And gosh, do I love you.

First off, I'm so glad X has something he can do that the other brothers can not: mind-speaking. At least to Shade. I'm so afraid of Sex taking over the brothers, it makes me feel so much better to know that Sex still lacks in something. But now that Sex is such a good fighter, what about Azrael? He can't learn new fighting skills as quickly, and Sex can kill in cold blood as well.. I sincerely hope Az finds something that's special. Something only he can do. Please give him a talent. Other than playing the cello.. since Sex could easily be the dominant brother even without playing the cello.

And of course, the photoshoot was so damn hot! Mm.. I was in a terrible mood before I read this chapter (in fact, I was blubbering), but I smiled when I was reading the photoshoot. You're the cure to my misery. God, I love you!

Meow! You really earned yourself a good sleep. That was sooooooo hot - I wish the guys were real. Claudius is seduction on heels and the puns. I'm still drooling... This chapter ended the bad mood I was caught in today. Thank you so much.

Ping has a surprise for Haley? Makes me curious since it's to early for the pups to be born.
Will all the girls meet at once? I want them to gang up and make pod-life even more funny than it is. Your girls are as great as your boys. Will Haru-chan get defense-training? If she is expected to help Ping with the puppies it might be in order. I expect the puppies to be as temperamental as their parents. Fun fun fun. Will you put a poll for the names?

Happily waiting for the next chapter! Your story is the best damn thing I came upon the last time - it always manages to cheer me up even when it makes me cry. Go on!

I swear you are just getting better and more intense at writing those photo shoot scenes.. amazing. And I'm so happy Sex and Claudius get an extra day! Though it's weird that neither Sex or Azrael can hear Shade.. or no wait! It has to do with that role-giving thing on the beach right? With Xavier as that intermediate middle kinda guy, so he can hear Shade, but the other two being the killer and Hashmallim can't because...they can make up their own mind? or just have a particular mindset? hmm..

Claudius mustn't forget to give Sex his locket back. Are them two going to get married? Can a body be married four times over to three different people? lol this is such a complex knot, yet so entertaining. Talk about weddings etc, I'm excited to read Claudia and Xavier's wedding... All royal and full of rituals, or so I'm guessing..

Keep up the great work!! :)

~Spiritxx

Sasha and Sex what a combo:)

LMAO! "My head is glued to the carpet". Ok seriously, the entire chapter was witty, but that just it over the edge for me to pure amazement! Well done indeed :)