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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Sex! I feel for you. That joke was not the least bit funny!
where is X's ring? Claudia will be upset...
Kiix...i dont know how you do it..Great Chapter I was on edge the whole time. I cant wait to see what is next.
where is X's ring? Claudia will be upset...
Kiix...i dont know how you do it..Great Chapter I was on edge the whole time. I cant wait to see what is next.
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was an unexpected last line.
That was also an unexpected ending.
Hell, that was an unexpected chapter altogether!
I hadn't realized how emotionally affected Sex would be, having to dominate the Male Alpha.
Poor, poor Sex. But...
ARMOR IS BACK!!
I missed Armor. Seems like I haven't seen him for ages. I'm glad to have him back. *throws a Welcome Home Party in his honour*
That was also an unexpected ending.
Hell, that was an unexpected chapter altogether!
I hadn't realized how emotionally affected Sex would be, having to dominate the Male Alpha.
Poor, poor Sex. But...
ARMOR IS BACK!!
I missed Armor. Seems like I haven't seen him for ages. I'm glad to have him back. *throws a Welcome Home Party in his honour*
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So when will we finally meet Britta, we keep hearing about her but haven't actually seen her:)
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The wedding ring, the wedding ring, I know something happened... argh my memory's not working!!! Great chapter, love the insight into Sex's feelings after he raped Vladimir.. Definitely happy you didn't include that in, it made the throwing up scene much more powerful. It's also nice that Sex and Armor weren't fighting, and we find out a little about Armor's side while he raped Xavier. Interesting...
Keep it coming!! :)
~Spiritxx
Keep it coming!! :)
~Spiritxx
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The ring - finally it hit. This time Claudia won't need to hunt X down but I guess a little teasing is in order. So curious right now.
It's good that Hades realizes when to better back down, though I'm glad he tries. I'm a fool for the little hottie but that goes for half of the guys. Armor comforting Sex was especially sweet. It's always nice when he acts as big brother - sometimes stern, sometimes comforting or teasing, though the wisecracker-award goes to Haley.
Did I get it right that Haley can play 'top-dog' from now on? I would have guessed he must grow out and fight Vladimir for his position. Speaking of Vlad - how does the selection work? If Britta doesn't know about the Imperial alphas by now, Ping and her sisters didn't make a public call for candidates but Vladimir is the Russian derivate from a German name and I doubt an eastern lycan would name his/her son this. Whatever if the name is program, Haley will have trouble ahead. Fortunately first priority is kicking Britta's ass. It's a shame that her pack's blood will be spilled. She reduces Haley's and Derry's effort and sacrifice to nothing out of arrogance or did she have had a hand in the Vampire killing lycan and the pubs disturbed her planning?
Thank you for your last comment. You figured I like you too. Have a nice weekend!
It's good that Hades realizes when to better back down, though I'm glad he tries. I'm a fool for the little hottie but that goes for half of the guys. Armor comforting Sex was especially sweet. It's always nice when he acts as big brother - sometimes stern, sometimes comforting or teasing, though the wisecracker-award goes to Haley.
Did I get it right that Haley can play 'top-dog' from now on? I would have guessed he must grow out and fight Vladimir for his position. Speaking of Vlad - how does the selection work? If Britta doesn't know about the Imperial alphas by now, Ping and her sisters didn't make a public call for candidates but Vladimir is the Russian derivate from a German name and I doubt an eastern lycan would name his/her son this. Whatever if the name is program, Haley will have trouble ahead. Fortunately first priority is kicking Britta's ass. It's a shame that her pack's blood will be spilled. She reduces Haley's and Derry's effort and sacrifice to nothing out of arrogance or did she have had a hand in the Vampire killing lycan and the pubs disturbed her planning?
Thank you for your last comment. You figured I like you too. Have a nice weekend!
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, and how you've created the characters. It's almost impossible to find good slash where the characters actually change and, well, evolve, during the story. I want Britta dead soon, so hurry up and update! XD
(English is not my first language so there's probaby tons of mistakes here ^^ Ignore them.)
(English is not my first language so there's probaby tons of mistakes here ^^ Ignore them.)
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20 - Aww. I'm dissapointed. My heart was set on a Five-layer Lycan Club Sandwhich with Sex on top. So sad. But poor Sex! Getting like that because he dominated the leader. I understand, though. Armor giving advice was sweet. In a weird way. Because Armor was the one raping him. So, now that that's over with, Vladimir should get together with Lanseng. Yes. I am hopeless. Constantly matchmaking your characters.
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As i was getting to the end of the chapter i was just going awwwww poor sex.... and then the last comment "uh... where was Xavier's wedding ring?" I just went Oh. God.
The brothers seem to have this bad luck thing where they all destroy the other's tokens... you have Azrael taking out Armor's token AND breaking Sex's chain, and now Sex has lost Xavier's wedding ring... i can't wait to see what's next.
And on the side note =P I love that cute little Hayley has gone from being dominated to being the dominator... man he's gonna start to get sexed out =P What with Ping and dominating the pack...
Keep up the excellent work... i was really depressed cause i'm having issues going back to an old job and stuff just keeps happening to keep me away and this cheered me up. You're almost daily updates keep me sane :)
The brothers seem to have this bad luck thing where they all destroy the other's tokens... you have Azrael taking out Armor's token AND breaking Sex's chain, and now Sex has lost Xavier's wedding ring... i can't wait to see what's next.
And on the side note =P I love that cute little Hayley has gone from being dominated to being the dominator... man he's gonna start to get sexed out =P What with Ping and dominating the pack...
Keep up the excellent work... i was really depressed cause i'm having issues going back to an old job and stuff just keeps happening to keep me away and this cheered me up. You're almost daily updates keep me sane :)
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooooh he lost his wedding ring!! man you just keep the drama coming. so sex is accepting advice from marcus/armour now?? are you going to make Vladimir into a problem-lycan?? i hope so. this is really good im loving it.
**********i changed the plot to my story im writing. at first it was supposed to be a m/f fic with some peg but now its turning into a slasher/dark fic. should i go with the flow or keep it to the original plot line?? please i need the advice. thanx and kudos and caramel
**********i changed the plot to my story im writing. at first it was supposed to be a m/f fic with some peg but now its turning into a slasher/dark fic. should i go with the flow or keep it to the original plot line?? please i need the advice. thanx and kudos and caramel
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I feel bad for Sex if he was the one to lose that engagement ring. Haley's so cute, his innocent way of acting is adorable. Great chapter, update soon please!!!!