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person Jenna T.
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 49 - NOOOO! Why do you do this to me? Everything was going great and then I start crying! Somehow, though, I knew that was going to happen because he has blue blood and yeah. WHY? WHY? WHY WAS HE SO COLD? I guess because he was trying to show everyone that he can be stern and regal and whatever. BUT STILL. POOR X/Sex/Az. They went through so much shit for what? NOTHING? Jesus Christ. I am so mad now I can't even cry. Nope. I still can.

Have a good vacation!
person Rosei
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 48-49

FAN-F@CKING-TASTIC!
WOW!!
WOW!!!
WOW!!!!
WOW!!!!!
I don't know what else to say!!!
It's all toooooo much!!!!!

Your the best!!!!!
Thanks,
R

PS More later...
person k
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought about Claudius being the legal emperor and I thought it would the brothers leave the time to grow into it but now ... everything is so scattered. Please don't leave us hanging for too long with this, otherwise I go nuts over it. I LOVE THIS SAGA!!!!!

Have a nice break!
person ANGELA
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O___O you are evil ::is stunned:: OMFG, that did NOT just happen ;____; my brain is so frazzelled, that i have no clue what to say, only.....i NEED to know what happens next

POor poor X

have fun while your gone ^^
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's amazing really the way you write. Your characters just stick in the mind. Your stories are just amazing, been reading the Lord Emperor Vampire Series since near the end of Cake, never really commented though cause I normally read it when I technically don’t have the time to. But it’s amazing and I just can’t help it. You keep doing sad endings. Xavier tries so hard and yet things keep falling apart. Kinda sad but cool.
person k
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.K. stopped crying for now but still with tons of questions:

- How can Sex truly believe Sasha would betray him? As his father I would have done the same, trying to protect him (truthfully all my children and grandchildren) through taking the burden of leadership from him until it's truly his time to become emperor. He could stop being the big target (with his origins and mate he wouldn't stop being one, but one less big.) He would have time for his children and family, basically for living.
- The Lycans: Sasha wouldn't take them from him, nor could he, except he was going to kill them. The pack is bonded to Xavier and while the issue may be solveable with the rest of the pack through dominance, it wouldn't work with the Zsigmond's family and Vladimir.
- Who will feed the hellcats?!!!!
- Haru-chan and Chesterton, I like that but who is the mysterious girl in Riot's life. Edna as his mother surely sensed it right and if Riot isn't the next Loyal to fall head over feed in unrequited love with one of the family, he must be with someone. I will watch out for the next hint.
- I always thought Lois was the way she is because she is a descendant of the same line and Shayne stated she takes after her while Lane takes after her father. Now, that the mindtalking with the hellcats seems to have nothing to do with it, there must be something behind. What?
- What are the Orel Wessel now planning and why are they only targeting the brothers? Don't seem to be the hunters but the way the OW talks to X sounds intimate if not caring. I wonder if Sigmund is back too?
- Lanseng something like Bruce missing? O.K. I accept he can't see the brothers or Claudius because of the Alarik-incident but missing Britta and Bruce???
- Britta? She isn't done with the family (including Haley and Ping) but what the hell is her problem? She surely has a point beside killing some boredom.
- Hashmallim: I honestly believe they are Hashmallim together. The prophecy leaves place for it and Endellion is still with the brothers.
- The family-notations are going to be baffling. A father, who is a grandfather at the same time; an originator, who is grandfather through the father and a grandfather through marriage, who technically is also an uncle and brother to the father, who X referred to as his son and so on and on and on.

Far far away. The brothers land as seperate entities on the beach, Liam is a single entity, I have no doubts Claudius will find a way to the beach too (leaves the question where Sigmund is). It's going to become nosy and tight there. When the brothers are to be reborn, will they need different 'new vessels'? I can't imagine them tossing who goes first - they wouldn't want to without the others and unless triplets are going to become the new standard in v.D. that's going to be a long wait but I guess that's anyway ages away.

Still so many questions but enough of the bugging for now. Though I honestly hope the last lines indicate Claudius coming flying to rescue his love and afterward smack his ass for being unfaithful and unreasonable. Oh and thank you for Hades - you know I'm a fool for him and want to see him happy.

Good luck!
person laur
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HOLLY CRAP OOLLLY!

Oh man....damn....that was a....damn. That was fucked up. Can't wait for Cloves.
person AsyenMari
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kiix,
I mean this in the nicest possible way but... WHAT THE F KIND OF ENDING WAS THAT!?! Are we imitating the tragic Harry Potter? (Give him everything he could possibly want, then rip it away and watch him suffer?) *sigh* Ah well, you're the author. Hopefully you know what you're doing-- I'm sure you do.

Have a nice vacation, hope to see the first installment of Cloves soon.
Asyen
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh wow another great story ended
wow u r good at evilnesss
i hope cloves starts soon
have a great holiday
person Anon
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Orel Wessel will watch over you."

THE HELL THEY WILL!!

*stares*

You... Didnt. You didnt just do that.