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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! You are so not allowed a cliffy like that! After everything Marcus has done before! Just.... AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
-cough- anyways i still miss Xavier, and it seems were going to see Azrael again soon.... and as for Vladimir i'm torn between letting him pine away for Sex or having him be a complete idiot and try to challange Claudius.... i'm sort of leaning more towards him trying to challange Claudius because i want to see him get his ass kicked by Claudius, and then Sex and then Hayley and then probably Xavier and/or Azrael... it would be awesome =P
Awesome chapter, keep up the good work and once again AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MARCUS AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Cliffy!!!!! -coughs- Sorry =P
-cough- anyways i still miss Xavier, and it seems were going to see Azrael again soon.... and as for Vladimir i'm torn between letting him pine away for Sex or having him be a complete idiot and try to challange Claudius.... i'm sort of leaning more towards him trying to challange Claudius because i want to see him get his ass kicked by Claudius, and then Sex and then Hayley and then probably Xavier and/or Azrael... it would be awesome =P
Awesome chapter, keep up the good work and once again AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MARCUS AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Cliffy!!!!! -coughs- Sorry =P
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No no no no no! Marcus go away! Just when he's thinking he's happy, Marcus has to show up...
And about Vlad.. well, another lover is definitely NOT in order for SAX. No way. Vlad will just have to realize that the nick in his ear was a warning, and not a demonstration of love. Though that might take some time to happen, so maybe he should try and conform to his upbringing (nick in ear = love) and SAX will have to punish him. Like, three-four times, and then Vlad'll get the message and back off.. Either of his own accord, or through death/suicide, or 'resigning'--if such a thing is possible.
Love love love the description of the picture of Claudius and Sex.. hot hot hot!!!!
Looking forward to the next chapter, and what Marcus is gonna do to Sex... though wait... how did Marcus know about Lanny and Azrael's meeting place/time? hmm
~Spiritxx
And about Vlad.. well, another lover is definitely NOT in order for SAX. No way. Vlad will just have to realize that the nick in his ear was a warning, and not a demonstration of love. Though that might take some time to happen, so maybe he should try and conform to his upbringing (nick in ear = love) and SAX will have to punish him. Like, three-four times, and then Vlad'll get the message and back off.. Either of his own accord, or through death/suicide, or 'resigning'--if such a thing is possible.
Love love love the description of the picture of Claudius and Sex.. hot hot hot!!!!
Looking forward to the next chapter, and what Marcus is gonna do to Sex... though wait... how did Marcus know about Lanny and Azrael's meeting place/time? hmm
~Spiritxx
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
You said that Vladimir as been attacked in the same why you do for a bond mate BUT! you said in the story that Haley deals with them standing in his place as "pack leader" (or something along those lines). So does that mean Haley as to mates? *giggles*
Also i really liked "Lanny" till the end of the chapter know he is in my "you have 5 mins to run so run fast"if he has somthing to do with this i am going to be no happy!!! I think Marcus has been given to many chances and needs to prove himself without people helping him and grow up!!! i think him and hades are perfect for each other (even though i don't know why but i like hades he's great!)
Something i thought would be cool is if anyone that can draw could do a pic of Sex and Claudius from the photo shoot and they get posted so we can all see. just brain storming.
well thats it's from me.
-HallowsEve
p.s i really love your stuff it's like a drug i always want more.
You said that Vladimir as been attacked in the same why you do for a bond mate BUT! you said in the story that Haley deals with them standing in his place as "pack leader" (or something along those lines). So does that mean Haley as to mates? *giggles*
Also i really liked "Lanny" till the end of the chapter know he is in my "you have 5 mins to run so run fast"if he has somthing to do with this i am going to be no happy!!! I think Marcus has been given to many chances and needs to prove himself without people helping him and grow up!!! i think him and hades are perfect for each other (even though i don't know why but i like hades he's great!)
Something i thought would be cool is if anyone that can draw could do a pic of Sex and Claudius from the photo shoot and they get posted so we can all see. just brain storming.
well thats it's from me.
-HallowsEve
p.s i really love your stuff it's like a drug i always want more.
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Marcus? That fast? It's just a chello-lesson, isn't it?
Haley feels save and protected with Alpha and acts still like a little brother. He really is a cuty. I tend to forget he is about 40 years of age but I fear Vlad will give him countless reminders. What about Ping's surprise? Did I miss it?
Liam is backing up the brothers but never giving anything away freely. That's hardly helpful. While I'm a fan of learning things by themselves and making mistakes, I still think it neccessary to give the brothers a little more insight. A hint here and there. They don't have a manual and beside Claudius' rant, he can't teach the brothers about half of the Emperor-stuff. They have hardly the time to figure it all by themselves, although they are quick learners - They have to fight against half of the Lycan-nation, plus a menacing hunter-sister, stalker-killers of unknown origin and a bunch of want-to-be-lovers lining up for the brother's ass. Please, Liam!
If Liam was that way with Hades, I want him to - sorry - fuck of!! First messing up the little hotty, then leaving him as walking death in a mortal realm for centuries and now making him hurt and even fun of him. For god's sake, Liam made him into that twisted slightly bi-polar walking attitude problem and putting on some ears and tail doesn't count as proper apology.
I'm hoping for a new chapter soon. Everything get's so heated. I love Caramel. Go on!
Haley feels save and protected with Alpha and acts still like a little brother. He really is a cuty. I tend to forget he is about 40 years of age but I fear Vlad will give him countless reminders. What about Ping's surprise? Did I miss it?
Liam is backing up the brothers but never giving anything away freely. That's hardly helpful. While I'm a fan of learning things by themselves and making mistakes, I still think it neccessary to give the brothers a little more insight. A hint here and there. They don't have a manual and beside Claudius' rant, he can't teach the brothers about half of the Emperor-stuff. They have hardly the time to figure it all by themselves, although they are quick learners - They have to fight against half of the Lycan-nation, plus a menacing hunter-sister, stalker-killers of unknown origin and a bunch of want-to-be-lovers lining up for the brother's ass. Please, Liam!
If Liam was that way with Hades, I want him to - sorry - fuck of!! First messing up the little hotty, then leaving him as walking death in a mortal realm for centuries and now making him hurt and even fun of him. For god's sake, Liam made him into that twisted slightly bi-polar walking attitude problem and putting on some ears and tail doesn't count as proper apology.
I'm hoping for a new chapter soon. Everything get's so heated. I love Caramel. Go on!
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not really about this chapter but since the Lycans regard females with such respect, does that mean Haru-chan, as a household-member, is going to have some authority over the pack in Von Drachenfeld? Claudia going to is sort of a given and I would like to see Haru-chan as Haruka-sensei for the little wolflings, although Chesterton would be great with them too.
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^^;; I know its been awhile since I've give you a review but I *have* been reading, I swear. *bows in forgiveness* Hopefully this review will make up for it ;)
Vladimir should not-so secretly pine away for his Siberian Vampire, try and take Claudius' place, but ultimately fail in all attempts. Sex should tell him (probably publicly) that even if he did take him as a matebond, he *won't* dominate him unless he had no choice to, like for official business, and he has no desire to bed him ever again. I would imagine that it would be a great insult to for Vladimir or any other Lycan to be taken as a matebond but their mate not want to take them. It would also serve as a punishment, as I'm sure that now that Vladimir can't be taken as another female's matebond, unless maybe Sex released him from it and healed his ear. There should probably be a few Vladimir/Haley confrontations.
*giggles* I think Haley is going to get into a bit of trouble with Ping for flirting with the girls. And he may need a bit more "training" for him to learn not to do that. Heheh. And speaking of those two, Az/Sex/X need to walk in on those two having sex a few times, just because I think Haley MIGHT like the idea of his Alpha watching him, and maybe joining in ;) They wouldn't of course do either, and Ping wouldn't want that either, but that can't stop Haley from wishing it
Why do I get the feeling that HC is really someone BIG and important in the world of Orel Wessel. Its probably well known that the brothers aren't that old so they wouldn't know all of the important groups and members yet. When I read the line, "I am but a lowly soldier of no consequence..", I got the feeling that he was anything BUT a lowly soldier of no consequence. He may see himself as that, but the reality of the situation is very different.
I think that Marcus has joined the ranks of the villains in this series. He's not a terribly evil person, but for awhile, has been in 2/3 brother's bad books and is now in all 3s. It may take a lot to redeem himself. I feel bad for Armor because he has to take any punishment that Marcus gets as well, even though he didn't do anything.
I wonder what crazy-hurt Marcus is going to try and do to Sex. Hopefully nothing too bad. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Btw, you said a couple of chapters ago that you were sending Cake to a publisher. Have you heard anyword from them about it yet?
Vladimir should not-so secretly pine away for his Siberian Vampire, try and take Claudius' place, but ultimately fail in all attempts. Sex should tell him (probably publicly) that even if he did take him as a matebond, he *won't* dominate him unless he had no choice to, like for official business, and he has no desire to bed him ever again. I would imagine that it would be a great insult to for Vladimir or any other Lycan to be taken as a matebond but their mate not want to take them. It would also serve as a punishment, as I'm sure that now that Vladimir can't be taken as another female's matebond, unless maybe Sex released him from it and healed his ear. There should probably be a few Vladimir/Haley confrontations.
*giggles* I think Haley is going to get into a bit of trouble with Ping for flirting with the girls. And he may need a bit more "training" for him to learn not to do that. Heheh. And speaking of those two, Az/Sex/X need to walk in on those two having sex a few times, just because I think Haley MIGHT like the idea of his Alpha watching him, and maybe joining in ;) They wouldn't of course do either, and Ping wouldn't want that either, but that can't stop Haley from wishing it
Why do I get the feeling that HC is really someone BIG and important in the world of Orel Wessel. Its probably well known that the brothers aren't that old so they wouldn't know all of the important groups and members yet. When I read the line, "I am but a lowly soldier of no consequence..", I got the feeling that he was anything BUT a lowly soldier of no consequence. He may see himself as that, but the reality of the situation is very different.
I think that Marcus has joined the ranks of the villains in this series. He's not a terribly evil person, but for awhile, has been in 2/3 brother's bad books and is now in all 3s. It may take a lot to redeem himself. I feel bad for Armor because he has to take any punishment that Marcus gets as well, even though he didn't do anything.
I wonder what crazy-hurt Marcus is going to try and do to Sex. Hopefully nothing too bad. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Btw, you said a couple of chapters ago that you were sending Cake to a publisher. Have you heard anyword from them about it yet?
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I WILL KILL MARCUS!!!!
Man i thought we was just crazy but harming my SEX is so out of the fin question. I know Armor is there but DAMN...GRRRRR!!!
Kiiiiix....your evil and are playing with my emotions!!!! UPDATE SOOOOOON!
Hot Chocolate....that made me giggle for some reason.
Man i thought we was just crazy but harming my SEX is so out of the fin question. I know Armor is there but DAMN...GRRRRR!!!
Kiiiiix....your evil and are playing with my emotions!!!! UPDATE SOOOOOON!
Hot Chocolate....that made me giggle for some reason.
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! YOU CANNOT DO THAT!!!!!! wow im impressed with the way you build it up then WAM!! just drop it on us. plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz! update!! oh you had a typo. 'Oren' instead of 'Orel' p.s. make vlad act on it even though the boys dont need anymore drama ;)
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Quick update. It is most welcome. Thank you!
Well, this chapter I believe answers some of my questions and thoughts from the previous chapter's review. *nods* The situation with Vladimir seems to be 'nipped in the butt', for now anyway. I can't see him fully giving up just yet, with him taking a quick sniff of Sex's hair and all.
Oh Boy did Sex ever mess that Swakhammer guy up(That actually made me laugh a little) and pretty much euthanized that pack of pups! The Lord Emperor is very good at making statements. Why does Britta continue to send pups out? Doesn't she recall what happened to the last pack she sent out. Geez, pups must be a dime a dozen.
Haley is so on the ball. I just about fell out my chair when he was talking about Xavier having gas. Just putting more of Sex's business on the street. Lol! What's with him calling Lanseng, 'Lanny'? I assume they must have an understanding. When will Haley change into an Alpha?
All this action in the middle of the day. Life is anything but dull in the Von Drachenfeld household.
Well, this chapter I believe answers some of my questions and thoughts from the previous chapter's review. *nods* The situation with Vladimir seems to be 'nipped in the butt', for now anyway. I can't see him fully giving up just yet, with him taking a quick sniff of Sex's hair and all.
Oh Boy did Sex ever mess that Swakhammer guy up(That actually made me laugh a little) and pretty much euthanized that pack of pups! The Lord Emperor is very good at making statements. Why does Britta continue to send pups out? Doesn't she recall what happened to the last pack she sent out. Geez, pups must be a dime a dozen.
Haley is so on the ball. I just about fell out my chair when he was talking about Xavier having gas. Just putting more of Sex's business on the street. Lol! What's with him calling Lanseng, 'Lanny'? I assume they must have an understanding. When will Haley change into an Alpha?
All this action in the middle of the day. Life is anything but dull in the Von Drachenfeld household.
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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As always, great chapter. And also as always, poor Xavier/Sex/Azrael.. uh.. yeah.. anyway, now they have someone else that wants him dead.. uh.. them..
ANYway, I believe that Sex really got the bad end of their shared life. First getting raped everyday for a year, then being Hades' sexslave and so on. What will happen next the Lycans will feel the need to be dominated every day, and it has to be him doing it? Oh poor Sex..
Do update soon. ^^
ANYway, I believe that Sex really got the bad end of their shared life. First getting raped everyday for a year, then being Hades' sexslave and so on. What will happen next the Lycans will feel the need to be dominated every day, and it has to be him doing it? Oh poor Sex..
Do update soon. ^^