AFF Fiction Portal
person shiden
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i've read book 1 2 and what you have of book 3,
i have to say, i didn't get much sleep whilst reading them. i've really enjoyed them :)

although sometimes i was confused out of my bits about what sort of things where happening. it jumped and i got confused, or i wasn't sure who was speaking which dialog,
but it was still good

keep up the good work...

i can't wait to read the remaining chapters!
person Jenna T.
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 23 - Haha. 'Lanny' copped a feel. God, I love him. I'm so tired. It's raining and I feel like a bug in a rug but I'm in a uncomfortable computer chair. So...I dunno. There's another chapter and, well, since it's yours I'll read it. If this was ANYONE else's story I'd hit the sheets right about now.
person Jenna T.
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 24 - Oh, Marcus. I don't know what to say any more. I'm really trying hard to stay liking Marcus atleast a little bit but I don't know. I think, come next chapter, it's going to be hard. Anyways, I gather that Lanseng with the cello case was a warning that Marcus was behind him about to jump him?

Well, Sex has interesting strolls about the town.

Earlier, there was a power outage and I got some much needed sleep. But I had a tiny fantasy with your lovely characters with something you mentioned. SO... Vladimir gets all depressed and whatnot and when it comes time to kill someone or someones or whatever he fails because of the depression. And then Claudius notices it and feels sorry for the poor kid and asks Sex to have a threesome. I think something else happens but I forgot. OH! They had a sexy pillow fight in it, too. Claudius was in pig tails and, yes, cat ears, too. God, I love dreams.

person a.taste.of.insanity
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“OhmygodyourthatmodelsexIjustsawthenewposteruponMainandFirststreetitisabsolutelysmokinghotsandyoureyesaresogreen!”

That made me laugh so hard!

And wow, I actually thought about that ear thing with Vlad.. but then I thought it only worked for Female Alphas and their mates.. so I disregarded it.

It's Marcus. AH!

And the poster sounds SO hot.
person Ciar
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Marcus is back! Yay! Oh and Lanseng just over the street, this should be fun.
And where do you get all these bad guys from? Wherever X turns a new evil force pops up. Like daisys in the spring. Oops, did I offend someone from the evil side (uh.. sides..) now XD
person paradox
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I've been a bad Loyal... I love this story!!! It's awesome! You're awesome! I'm crashing... *collapse*
person Jenna T.
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 22 - Well, I have to say, Claudia's not that bad at all. She's actually quite...pleasant. THERE! I SAID IT! She's pleasant. Alright. Moving on. Yay! Triplets! Two girls and a boy for Lanseng. Or Vladimir. I know. I am tres x fucked up.
person BlackOpal
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.my.god. Marcus. Seriously what is he thinking???! *sighs* you do realize now that because of where you left it, i'm going to have a terrible time focusing on my finals??? O_O *bribes with strawberries pocky and cuddles and possible another really long chapter of if i knew then*
person miles
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow ! Very intense chapter ! and beautiful also... Until more...
person Cindyip
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh bring Az and Marcus back together, they need each other:)