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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story as well as the other two. I started reading cake about 3 days ago and just haven't been able to stop reading. I can't wait for the next chapter of caramel.
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The junior-vamps:
2 girls, one boy; named Viktor, Hope and Cassandra. I would like the girls to be first-borns. They would, of course, take care of their little brother. For he is a boy he would develop his vampiric gifts later as the girls. I assume there exist more male blue-gene-carrier than females among the humans (beside Shayne's). Why? I don't know but if so, girls are neccsassary for later alliances and there should be more females, because more of them are needed for conversation of the (blue) species. I would like to see the little ones develop different gifts at different times and act individually. For example Cassandra to act with providence while Viktor normally runs his head against the wall. I imagine one of them to be the balancing point and that would be Hope but anything you are going to do with them will make me happy; it's just my imagination, running wild.
Vlad:
I never wanted to see him dead. I guess I phrased that a bit ambiguous. Technically Sex could heal the lycan's ear but I like the idea of having him as mate (second row to Claudius!). First, it's a good lesson for Sex to think before acting and second, no more unneccassary diversions with Vlad around. Does Vlad move up in hirarchy as Sex's mate? I can imagine him as intimidating lycan but at the same time wrapped around the baby-fang's little fingers. Claudius will be pissed when he learns about Sex's mistake with marking the lycan.
Thank you for this chapter and all the others, I especially liked the improvement with Hades and Sex's relationship. No friends yet but they are vampires and like Hades so eloquently stated, have nothing but time. I love honeybee. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!
2 girls, one boy; named Viktor, Hope and Cassandra. I would like the girls to be first-borns. They would, of course, take care of their little brother. For he is a boy he would develop his vampiric gifts later as the girls. I assume there exist more male blue-gene-carrier than females among the humans (beside Shayne's). Why? I don't know but if so, girls are neccsassary for later alliances and there should be more females, because more of them are needed for conversation of the (blue) species. I would like to see the little ones develop different gifts at different times and act individually. For example Cassandra to act with providence while Viktor normally runs his head against the wall. I imagine one of them to be the balancing point and that would be Hope but anything you are going to do with them will make me happy; it's just my imagination, running wild.
Vlad:
I never wanted to see him dead. I guess I phrased that a bit ambiguous. Technically Sex could heal the lycan's ear but I like the idea of having him as mate (second row to Claudius!). First, it's a good lesson for Sex to think before acting and second, no more unneccassary diversions with Vlad around. Does Vlad move up in hirarchy as Sex's mate? I can imagine him as intimidating lycan but at the same time wrapped around the baby-fang's little fingers. Claudius will be pissed when he learns about Sex's mistake with marking the lycan.
Thank you for this chapter and all the others, I especially liked the improvement with Hades and Sex's relationship. No friends yet but they are vampires and like Hades so eloquently stated, have nothing but time. I love honeybee. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thats a wonderful twist... i think vlad is sexy so it works in my head.....lol..... but i wonder what sex is going to do now
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOH MAN!!!!!
SEx married Vlad! EWWwwwwwww! That would explain that closenessness! GREAT CHAPTER!
Vote: 2 girls and 1 boy. Isis, Iris, and Caspar ar teh names that sound cool to me. Iris would have blue eyes. Isis have the regular eyes and Caspar would be like the bale blue eyed ghost. Cool!
Oh bTW the first line had me cracking up with laughter. Love quick updates. Peace
SEx married Vlad! EWWwwwwwww! That would explain that closenessness! GREAT CHAPTER!
Vote: 2 girls and 1 boy. Isis, Iris, and Caspar ar teh names that sound cool to me. Iris would have blue eyes. Isis have the regular eyes and Caspar would be like the bale blue eyed ghost. Cool!
Oh bTW the first line had me cracking up with laughter. Love quick updates. Peace
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
1. Dragons of Pern -- author of the book would be Anne McCaffrey, I love her stuff, especially the Pern series.
2. beau coupe -- beaucoup :P (I'm bilingual French/English)
3. OMG. Lycans mate for life... didn't SAX know this?? I mean, with Haley and all... argh, like things just weren't complicated enough.. I totally see how 'caramel' is occuring. woah... that's about all I can manage right now. Great chapter. I'm glad to see that action against Britta is coming out, and that that war/issue is becoming more of a central issue.
Kudos for a great chapter!!! :)
~Spiritxx
2. beau coupe -- beaucoup :P (I'm bilingual French/English)
3. OMG. Lycans mate for life... didn't SAX know this?? I mean, with Haley and all... argh, like things just weren't complicated enough.. I totally see how 'caramel' is occuring. woah... that's about all I can manage right now. Great chapter. I'm glad to see that action against Britta is coming out, and that that war/issue is becoming more of a central issue.
Kudos for a great chapter!!! :)
~Spiritxx
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PS. Vote: Two girls, one boy. Names... Girls: Elyisha && Sanna, boy: Solem (pronounced so-LEM, in opposition as to the pronounciation of solemn.) Elyisha should be pretty headstrong, and Sanna kind of the peace maker between her siblings. Solem... up to you, either as headstrong as Elyisha, or more or less so.
Good luck!
Good luck!
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 26 - Poor Vladimir. He's got it bad. And Hades too. But in a different way. Actually, Vlad's obsession mildly reminds me of Hades when he wanted Sex to love him. Vladimir and Hades would make really great friends. Anyways, X and Claudia should have 2 boys and 1 girl. And names! You DEFINENTLY have to name one of them Julian. Definently. And for the other two...hmm...what about Alistair and Alice? Well, maybe not Alice. Maybe...Alexis? Alexiel? Something like that. And it was more like...shocked speechless. Is that good or bad? I don't know. Maybe not shocked. It was like: "God, they're all so fucked up. I love it but it's also kinda depressing". That kind of speechless. If that makes sense. I don't think it does but whatever.
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I haven't even read the chapter yet, but I saw your request of help/names and I couldn't refuse!
I think you should have the triplets like this:
1. Daughter
2. Son
3. Um.. not sure.
But you see, I keep thinking 3 - just like the brothers. So I always think that each one of the brothers will favour a certain child. So, the firstborn goes to Sex, since he's the oldest. And imagine him pampering a baby girl! The next goes to Xavier, because I somehow get the impression he would be the ultimate role model for the oldest son. The last goes to Azrael, and I can imagine him teaching a son how to fight properly.. but I can also imagine him being a softy just for his baby girl. So, not sure about the last kid.
But! for names, I think you should have it so they all mean something (as always).
As the oldest daughter, I think she would be the kinda older sister that would be protective, and a little bossy and seemingly mean... but she's just really caring. But then again, I can also see her as the sweet little mini-Sex. .. MINUS THE SEX! OMFG, NO!!! But, you know, charming. And I can imagine Claudius teaching her the piano when she gets older. So, whichever suits your taste.
As the oldest son but second child, I think he would be the ideal next Blood Emperor, you know? He'll be like a mini-Xavier, what with an older sister kinda like Shayne. (Omg, yes, make the daughter a bit like Shayne and Claudia!) Of course, I'd rather he not have the whole.. split personna thing. But I can imagine him living with his heart worn on his sleeve and such.
The last child is questionable, but if Azrael would take care of him/her, I can imagine he/she to be a total angel or a complete devil. But seeing as the last child is the youngest.. he/she would probably end up being pampered. But then, if he/she is trained by Azrael, he/she may end up kicking major ass.
So I can imagine the triplets working together one day to rule the Nation: Amazingly-Bossy-but-Quite-Caring Older Sister, Naive-but-Strong Older Brother, Kickass-but-oh-so-Sweet little sister. But it could also be.. Amazingly-Cute-and-Charming-But-So-Deadly Older Sister, Naive-But-Strong Older Brother, Kickass-and-don't-fuck-with-me little sister.. or brother. Haha, yeah. I have it all thought out in my head, don't I...
But for names! These are so kickass names.
Since they all seem to have rather eccentric names, here they are.. strangeness and all:
Male:
Salvador (Italian): savior
Lior (Hebrew): my light
Lucien (French): light
Zoran (Slavic): light of dawn
Radek (Czech): happy
Selig (Yiddish): happy
Shadi (Persian): happiness <-- sounds kinda like a certain Hellcat we know!
Iason (Greek): to heal
Khalid (Arabic): eternal, everlasting
Female:
Sigal (Hebrew): treasure
Adele (French): Noble
Callia (French): Beautiful
Odette (French): Home-lover
Raissa (French): the Believer <-- I love this one for the last daughter
Renita (Latin): to struggle / resistance
Sarina (English): lady/princess
Kateri (Mohawk): torture, pure <-- yeah, I wonder about that too...
Kira (Persian): the sun
Haha, yes, I do have these names sitting around. You see, I like to roleplay, therefore I have a huge collection of names. These are such lovely names, I think.
But it's just my opinion.
I think you should have the triplets like this:
1. Daughter
2. Son
3. Um.. not sure.
But you see, I keep thinking 3 - just like the brothers. So I always think that each one of the brothers will favour a certain child. So, the firstborn goes to Sex, since he's the oldest. And imagine him pampering a baby girl! The next goes to Xavier, because I somehow get the impression he would be the ultimate role model for the oldest son. The last goes to Azrael, and I can imagine him teaching a son how to fight properly.. but I can also imagine him being a softy just for his baby girl. So, not sure about the last kid.
But! for names, I think you should have it so they all mean something (as always).
As the oldest daughter, I think she would be the kinda older sister that would be protective, and a little bossy and seemingly mean... but she's just really caring. But then again, I can also see her as the sweet little mini-Sex. .. MINUS THE SEX! OMFG, NO!!! But, you know, charming. And I can imagine Claudius teaching her the piano when she gets older. So, whichever suits your taste.
As the oldest son but second child, I think he would be the ideal next Blood Emperor, you know? He'll be like a mini-Xavier, what with an older sister kinda like Shayne. (Omg, yes, make the daughter a bit like Shayne and Claudia!) Of course, I'd rather he not have the whole.. split personna thing. But I can imagine him living with his heart worn on his sleeve and such.
The last child is questionable, but if Azrael would take care of him/her, I can imagine he/she to be a total angel or a complete devil. But seeing as the last child is the youngest.. he/she would probably end up being pampered. But then, if he/she is trained by Azrael, he/she may end up kicking major ass.
So I can imagine the triplets working together one day to rule the Nation: Amazingly-Bossy-but-Quite-Caring Older Sister, Naive-but-Strong Older Brother, Kickass-but-oh-so-Sweet little sister. But it could also be.. Amazingly-Cute-and-Charming-But-So-Deadly Older Sister, Naive-But-Strong Older Brother, Kickass-and-don't-fuck-with-me little sister.. or brother. Haha, yeah. I have it all thought out in my head, don't I...
But for names! These are so kickass names.
Since they all seem to have rather eccentric names, here they are.. strangeness and all:
Male:
Salvador (Italian): savior
Lior (Hebrew): my light
Lucien (French): light
Zoran (Slavic): light of dawn
Radek (Czech): happy
Selig (Yiddish): happy
Shadi (Persian): happiness <-- sounds kinda like a certain Hellcat we know!
Iason (Greek): to heal
Khalid (Arabic): eternal, everlasting
Female:
Sigal (Hebrew): treasure
Adele (French): Noble
Callia (French): Beautiful
Odette (French): Home-lover
Raissa (French): the Believer <-- I love this one for the last daughter
Renita (Latin): to struggle / resistance
Sarina (English): lady/princess
Kateri (Mohawk): torture, pure <-- yeah, I wonder about that too...
Kira (Persian): the sun
Haha, yes, I do have these names sitting around. You see, I like to roleplay, therefore I have a huge collection of names. These are such lovely names, I think.
But it's just my opinion.
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May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
[cont'd - it looked like my last review was too long]
(male, cont'd)
Iason (Greek): to heal
Khalid (Arabic): eternal, everlasting
Female:
Sigal (Hebrew): treasure
Adele (French): Noble
Callia (French): Beautiful
Odette (French): Home-lover
Raissa (French): the Believer <-- I love this one for the last daughter
Renita (Latin): to struggle / resistance
Sarina (English): lady/princess
Kateri (Mohawk): torture, pure <-- yeah, I wonder about that too...
Kira (Persian): the sun
Haha, yes, I do have these names sitting around. You see, I like to roleplay, therefore I have a huge collection of names. These are such lovely names, I think.
But it's just my opinion.
(male, cont'd)
Iason (Greek): to heal
Khalid (Arabic): eternal, everlasting
Female:
Sigal (Hebrew): treasure
Adele (French): Noble
Callia (French): Beautiful
Odette (French): Home-lover
Raissa (French): the Believer <-- I love this one for the last daughter
Renita (Latin): to struggle / resistance
Sarina (English): lady/princess
Kateri (Mohawk): torture, pure <-- yeah, I wonder about that too...
Kira (Persian): the sun
Haha, yes, I do have these names sitting around. You see, I like to roleplay, therefore I have a huge collection of names. These are such lovely names, I think.
But it's just my opinion.
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, wow, another great chapter !
I vote for one boy and two girls !
One heir calls Sigmund (poor boy) or Yuri or both...
And for the girls, well perhaps their grandmother's names...
It's difficult ! "Bon courage" ^_°
I vote for one boy and two girls !
One heir calls Sigmund (poor boy) or Yuri or both...
And for the girls, well perhaps their grandmother's names...
It's difficult ! "Bon courage" ^_°