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T_TWhat happening to adultfanfiction, why are they being so meanT_T

Ah, there you go. I took the time to read it this time.

There were quite a few mentions of couplings in here. I think the sweetest are... oh alright, they're all pretty damn sweet.

ARMOR! Damn, I feel like I haven't seen him for ages. Poor fella.. you know what would suck? If Armor took the time and effort to rest up, feed, and cure their body.. and Marcus took over and fucked it up again.

Mindfuck, baby, mindfuck! I love that phrase 'mindfuck'.

I still don't know why Liam calls Sex 'Number One'... did I miss/forget something?

Oh, and it's cute how Sex is supposed to act all celebrity-like. XD

I just stumbled upon a.taste.of.insanity's name-suggestions. I like a few of them but have a little remark about the last female name. Raissa isn't french. It's the russian version of the name 'Rose'. (The wife of the former russian president Mikhail Gorbatschow was named Raissa.) There exists an arabic name (Ra'eesah), spoken much alike that means 'Princess'.

Aww Swx everything he does with good intentions always goes badly... well this is gonna put a new spin on things. If Sex HAS technically married Vladimir then it would be mean if everyoen attacked him because he was trying to fulfill his duties as a matebond... although he is really annoying so i still say he get his butt kicked.

And on the subject of the vamplings i say that Claudia should have 2 girls and 1 boy. That was Xavier gets both but he gets 2 girls who can wreak havok as they get older =P

Kiix,
Loved the recent chapter-- I apologize for not commenting in a while, life proved itself to be a whiny child that demanded my full attention. I will say that seeing that you have added a new chapter is customarily the highlight of my day. I thank you for providing me with some semblance of literary retreat. Oh and by the way the author of the Pern series is Anne McCaffery.
Asyen

great chapter!!!!!i love it!!!!
so x and vlad are now mate????????????????????????

well it woulld be great if there 2 girls and 1 boy that way there wouldn't be any trouble about how gets the throne.

and well i like the idea about vladimir challenging Claudius. i would like c the win but i don't like v to lose. so couldn't you make it equal???please!!!!!!

Chapter 26 Of Plans and Paws


HA! Well! Sex with Claudius and/or Sex with Vladimir?
Wow! Wow! I wish my life contained such choices!
(Not really.) Ha! Fun turn of events! Another mate.
Okay with me as Vladimir looks to be a total hottie!
(Of course Britta's Bruce, also, had that masculine
"hot thing" going too.) Is Bruce coming back?!

Thanks! (For the break!)
R

Oh the twists! Always never knowing what to expect next! Keep it up!

Arg. You and your cliffhangers :P As always this was a great chapter. I liked seeing more of Ping. It's nice to see a female character take more of a central role in the story. I vote that Claudia has three girls because it would be cute to see Xavier as a doting father, helpless to say no to his daughters, and it would be funny to see how all of the members of the house react to the presence of three cute little girls ^__^. Hmmm . . . with the Vladimir situation, I don't think public humiliation is the way to go. Maybe he could just pine away until Sex has time to accept and get to know him, then I vote for a threesome! ^___^ This is just what I think. I'm sure whatever you write will turn out great ^__^ I definately looking forward to the next update!