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Kiix,
Fantastic chapter-- poor Sex... when it rains it pours huh? I am impressed with the way you are having Claudius deal with the Vladimir situation. I must again praise you on your character development, it is truly like watching a movie or play.
Brava Infinite,
Asyen

Ohh that Vlad better learn his place *shakes fist* and LOL scalding away his manhood, cheese burn XD so funny.

And yes lol AFF hates pointy brackets. =P

UPDATE YAY!!!!

Vlad has asome damn nerve!!! He should be dead!!!! OOOH I am missing X what is going on with him?

I like the names of the girls...just need the pronunciations! VOTE FOR KASPAR or ALEX! They sound russian. The boy could be like Claudius. Raissa could be like Armor. A tomboy and Callia(sp) is soooooo X. A girly girl. that funny. okay UPDATE AGAIN AGAIN AND AGAIN!!

Chapter 27, "3 lbs of Lasagna"

Very sweet and sexy. That Vlad is H-O-T!
I hope he need lots of dominating from Claudius!
I really love their(your)sense of humor.
A little calmness for Sex and Claudius, (w/ Lasagna!)
What more could anyone ask for?

Thanks!
R

I was so sad when I came to read the UPDATED chapter, and found that it didn't work. When I came back to check, it was up and I swear I screamed with joy. XD

YAAAY! My suggested names made the cut! I'm so happy.

Just as a reminder to myself/others..

Raissa (French): the Believer
Callia (French): Beautiful
Zoran (Slavic): light of dawn

Happy, happy, happy!

"As if the Healing Light would leave me scars. Even the ones I had when I was human were gone." <-- Ooh, that's the first time you mentioned his scars being healed.

Claudius declared that he never acts on jealousy. Hmm, is he just saying that or is it really true? Because I remember he seemed pretty jealous "this morning", scent-marking Sex before the dominating and all. *giggles* Oh, that was cute, that was.

"I do not hear any sucking." LMAO! I laughed so hard at that.

And wow, I must've missed something because I had NO clue that Vlady had the hots for Sex because of that kilt photo. (Eh, when did Sex find out by the way..? I didn't know he searched Vlad's mind..)

AWESOME chapter. Keep it going! <3

Oops. I just read k's response to the name.

Heh, Raissa is Russian then, I suppose. Yay! More Russian names.

Oh my gosh... I swear, you outdo yourself on some of those lines.. not only you can make the witty but so romantic too.. *sigh* And poor Sex and everything's he's gone through just in a day. You sure know how to make a day full!! And Vlad better not act stupid again. I mean, sure he's Lycan but he's also got a brain, and anyone can see that this is NOT a normal arrangement.
Kudos and kisses for a great chapter!

~Spirit

Thank god, Claudius isn't into penguining! That's a chapter of my liking ... well, the others are too but I can't help it, I love Claudius as voice of reason, especially when he talks about Hades. Thank you so much!

To Vlad:
Ja tebje ssotschuwstbuju. Nje passui! Ject nadeschda. Schelaju tebje stschastja! (I feel for you. Don't give up! There's hope. I wish you luck!)

Your description of Vlad as a wolf is breathteaking. I want a photo shoot with him and Sex! Sex sitting on the back of the outstretched wolf, nonchalantly smiling into the camera... It would Britta piss of - posters everywhere she turns, practically declaring territorial war and stepping onto her pride.

Does Sex feel bad, knowing Claudius has to dominate Vladimir time and again? To me it doesn't look like Vlad will accept domination from Haley, now that he's Sex's matebond.

Please call X's little boy Alexander (or Viktor). Julian is a beautiful name but I prefer Alexander von Drachenfeld over Julian von Drachenfeld. To me it sounds more aristocratic. Of course the name Julian, since derived from a patrician family, is aristocratic too and wouldn't make the child bear a portentously name like Alexander ('man-fender', 'protector') but he anyway hasn't much choice than growing into it. The royals won't let him of the hook, inheriting or not.

Great chapter!


a.taste.of.insanity
If you are reading this review too, Thank you for not being angry because of the name. (BTW Callia is greek and several good wines from Argentinia carry that name :-) ).

To k:

I'm messing up all the origins of the names, aren't I? Bah.

I guess babynamenetwork.com fails me. They told me Callia was French. Don't know about Raissa.



About le names:

I like how Zoran von Drachenfeld looks too. XD But of course, it looks a little funny.

I agree that Alexander von Drachenfeld looks good. Hmm. Alex, Callia, and Raissa. Aww. The Triplets. So cute.

Poor X and Sex, going to be daddies soon, and they barely have control over their lives^_^;;