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Haru-chan and Armor, yeah, I'm happy! (Woudn't use Haruka '-sama' instead of '-san' for the Blood Emperor?)

X is good to look out for baby-brother, but he doesn't need to belittle him. Azrael can damn fine watch his ass with the big Russian lycan + Vladimir would suit Azrael well. One watchdog, one war-'dog' and a puppy. Wouldn't that be great? Marcus, grow fast to withstand competition! Do I want this? I don't know, I like Vlad and as said earlier, njelsja eschtscho est. Go for it, wolf-warrior!

What's that Armor-lycan-thing? He is fast to accept lycans in X's and his marital bed but his way of doing it is deliciously twisted. Domination fetish of a refined nature?

This chapter was great. I like your inbetweens, in that the boys can get a little rest and we readers summaries. Go on!

I vote again for the name Alexander - a baby-Sasha, I want a baby-Sasha.

I can't wait to see this wedding^_^

"good to go" ie action coming up? yippee!!
Great writing, can't wait for the next bit.
Gotta run :)

~Spiritxx

Well, I think "Emperor Yuri or Viktor Von Drachenfeld" is pretty good ! Not too long or too short ! :P

I got a little confused in the middle of that Armor/Vlad/X sandwich.

"I reached down and gave a yank on Marcus’ hair."

I don't think you mean Marcus, do you? I nearly hyperventilated when I saw Marcus in that sentence, thinking he suddenly appeared or something.

Oh! And I never heard that quote from Queen Victoria before. But I like it, I really do like it. And X with his car references. lol.

You're still ever so witty, go you.

And Happy Victoria Day. Or.. Happy May Long.. whatever you call it.

Chapter 27 - Aww. That was a cute ending. But Jesus. You have an amazing ability to make me randomnly feel sorry for a character. For example, even though this was an amazingly cute chapter I got all depressed because of Vlad. I'm not sure why but...I dunno. Anyways, it was a bit weird. SO. I don't know why he has to be named Julian. I just really, really like the name. I think it fits umm...your story. I know. I am very convincing.

I liked that domestic scene. I wonder what would happen if I came out of the shower and found a vampire sipping blood at my breakfast table... Oh, the possibilities.^^

Also, my deviant side seems to have taken a liking to Vladimir. (The rest of me is properly horrified.) It'll be interesting to see what he'll do next.

yea X is back. okay loved the chapter that vlad is bad! that rhymed. Update soon!

Dear Kiix,

My cat Xandre says that his name is really
Alexandre and that now Edward's son can also
go by X Jr.!

(My dog Bug, wonders why no one is interested
in naming anything after him.)

Thanks!
R