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Awesome! Shade is back and were gonna get to see Xavier in action! Keep up the good work =D

Mmmm pretties, I think I like the Claudius/Sex pairing the best, it's so emotional.

Really happy with the story...
poor vlad, upsetting the status quo :P and i really feel sorry for poor charlie... but i guess he deserves that :)
id like to see more azarel and the seer action... i really like the seer... i dont know why... but he is cool...

ADVERTISEMENT - well ,kinda...
Hi- I liked your stories about vamps very much (thank you thank you a million times ), and I also liked Janette's stories. I believe, that you would totally love them too . She is posting Sanctuary at slach section (http://original.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600092295) and she also has tons of stories in the same universe at her homepage : http://www.yaoihaven.net/blackwidower. There are vamps , interesting plot , tons of smut , and well I think you should try it. Though be warned, in her universe all vampires kill while feeding ,so there is a LOT of killing occuring. There is a little bit of gore too... Still, I'm sure you'll love her stories like I did.
Thanks again for writing about X

sorry ive been down and out. loving the whole lasagna scene. maybe you should do a ch. where lil vlad openly defies the golden trio and pissing off carnage, more so than usual, by challenging him in front of the whole house. big fight scene. then leave a cliffhanger lol

how come the retired lady regent and her hubby didnt know about the orel thing? havent they been around long enough or, no? vlad just so desperately wants at least a third of the golden trio. maybe him and azrael wouldnt be such a bad idea.~nods head~ whats going to happen to marcus? you've all but completely cut him out of the story. excluding the drunken alley scene. and when is ping going to have her lil bundle(s) of joy? but you know im loving the story. kudos.


p.s. do you know why the story "Jade Virgin" hasnt been updated? i just thought i'd ask though you probably dont have a clue.










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Chap 27-

Aww... no Vlad ass-kicking... well semi so but not done by Carnage =P Anyways. I'm going to point out that i've started my full time job now so my time to read your story is going to become limited. That doesn't mean i'm going to stop reading it =P It just means i'll be reading and reviewing some chapters in bulk =P

P.S I'm looking forward to seeing Xavier again... and the look on his face when he finds out about everything that's happened in TWO days!

Chap 28-

"Hardened little nubs of treason" - lmao! Oh god i couldn't stop laughing at that line =P That was awesome... I'm glad to hear from Xavier again... and i can't wait to see what happens now. Plus does Vlad know about the three brothers? Cause if he does, he should realize that Sex was the one who marked him (accidentally) and not Xavier or Azrael and thus he should be going after only Sex... or is he being stupid and saying one body, it's all the same?


P.S I'm guessing this is supposed to be said by Xavier and then his mother, not all by him. Thought i'd point it out. “I’m fine Mom. What about Azrael? He didn’t look that good from that entertainment news thing about the bachelor auction.”

Chapter 28 - Oh my. An ALMOST X/Armor/Vlad threesome. I feel lucky. It's been a while since we've had some X and Armor downtime. I missed it. And what does X's Mom have again? I'm pretty sure you mentioned it but I don't really remember what it was.

Chapter 28

Yeah... the Marcus name at such a moment was disturbing!

Maybe Azreal can handle Vlad. Then he would have a puppy
and a wolfie!! (And a Lansengy!)

Thanks,
R