rate_review Reviews

see I thought Hades slapped Laim because he could have taken over Claudius when he was a vampire, that is what I would have been mad about. Oh you are evil poor guy man I am so mad at them all.

oh my f^&king lord, i can't believe you just did that...

*speahless* mouth open..
woa

ok, im hooked for the next book...

hmmn... highly entertaining reading. i have two big complaints though. Your spelling is pretty awful... I didn't really notice it in 'caramel' too much, but during the first two books, you were using passed instead of past so many times i actualy cringed everytime i saw it! It was mostly mistakes like that rather than mis-spelt words, but they really detracted from my enjoyment of your story :( I know things like that are inevitable with such a vast quantity of writing, but would it really be such a hassle to use a beta? ...though, i have some nerve complaining to you about leaving mistakes like that in your writing when i'm guilty of the same thing lol! My other complaint is that your japanese sucks.

Anyway, I've really enjoyed reading all of this! You've created so many cool and endearing characters and such a catpivating story with so many exciting plot twists and such. And soooo long! Thanks so much for writing all this, it must have been a lot of hard work! You've given me many pleasant hours staring at the screen and i really appreciate it :)

Chapters 48-49

Well, I've just re-read them and I'm still
speechless! Wow! What an ending! (Can't wait
for the new beginning!) I didn't see any of
it coming (I'm not so intuitive), but it was
all super enjoyable.

Bruce is back! Britta's back in the game and
The vamps have a new Lord! And, our beautiful emo
vamp is now with "them". Wow! I'm still
trying to take it all in. There I was, innocently
eating leftover hotdogs and BAMM! The boys get their
insides ripped out! WOW!

I'll re-read these in a few and I'll get back here
with more running commentary.

Thanks,
R

Oh MY GOSH!!!!!

*Blink* What? Sasha, what did you do?O_o

This is the worst cliff hanger ever! Why? why? Poor X/Sex/Azrael :( They continually get screwed over and yet they get right back up but now? With this ending, I wonder if they'll be able to ever trust again much less love again. It's so sad and I feel so horrible for them but at the same time I can't help but think that maybe X/Sex/Azrael ight have jumped the gun and assumed the worst while in actuality Claudius, Armor, Marcus, and friends were a part of a plot that was supposed to be good intentioned and not harmful to X/Sex/Azrael. Either way, the brothers have been betrayed constantly and it's a wonder that they've been able to continue. Maybe it's time they wretched themselves away from everything to become strong again. No Vampires, no Lycans, no Orel Wessel. Maybe a normal life might be the ticket to recovery.

Wah~! Evilness thy name is kiix! I love you! You are so evil your characters. I love when authors are mean to their characters. I do it all the time! You have enticed me to review again! I'm going to get my friends to read this! Reia would definitely read it. Yashera and Seirei are starter yaoi fans so they might not be able to handle all this hard core smut, but I'll try to convince them! I'll be watching you. Ja ne!

Evil, very evil. Agh, I just can't believe it, no, I don't want to believe Sasha's been corrupted! I think Sex/X/Az jumped the gun running away, but then again, how much heart ache can one vamp take. And now OW has them! This story keeps me squirming.

Chapter 48 - I loved Hades and Liam's trouble in paradise special. That was adorable. Sort of. I didn't know that Liam didn't know that Hades cracked open X's head. Hmm...Claudius and Sex. So yummy. OH! That picture by Kiba is gorgeous. Really, really gorgeous. X has to have sex with Claudia? Ummm...that's going to be awkward.