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person Laur
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MULLETHEAD!!!
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Haha! I love that Cluadia is becoming more pod intwined. Now i read next chapter.
person Laur
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Shit!
person Rosei
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 29-30 of Caramel: Book 3 of the Lord Emperor Vampire Series!

(Whew! That was a lot of typing! HA!)

I love Xavier! I forgot, he's been gone for so long!
I love all the boys! Lex and X sound great!
Shade sounds alot like Kiix!
The plot thickens... I can't wait!
(And, on a more personal note my exams have ended,
so now I'm sitting pathetically by my computer
waiting for all and any updates to my favorite
stories. I don't have the excuse of school anymore!)

Thanks!
R
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sorry i haven't reviewed in a while. but i have a question if you wanted him to die of a quick death wouldn't it have bin better to have bin shout in the head insted of the heart. cause i mean in the head he died instantly but in the heart he still has to bleed to death before he accually dies. but other then that one guestion everything is great and i love your stories.
person k
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Find that poor were-kid! I hope he hasn't fallen into the rogues or Britta's hands to be used as a bait.
Thank you for the queen, emphasizing with Claudia, though I don't get why Claudius doesn't brood about this. Otherwise, no father wants to know about his daughters engaging in sex (even with a husband) and usually Claudia handles everything just fine. How is she supposed to settle things with Vlad. They can't put a fight for dominance. Can she advise Vlad to stay away from her husband? Would that be within her rights as X's alpha-female?

There is one thing, I really don't get. Why did Claudius give the envelope to X. Yes, X is a fine assassin but not the killing-for-killing-boredom-type and this job doesn't exactly fit into hiding in plain sight. Which brings me back to Hades ... miss him.

Good chapter, go on!
person Negai
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's nice that everything is so mundane :)
person Cindyip
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice, Shade's back. But why is X afraid of Marcus now? (^_^)
person miles
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this chapter is very funny ! love it !
person k
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was funny! Poor Claudia, she will never want to be pregnant again. I hope Shayne can calm her down and I'm glad X realizes he has to improve with her. I'm so sorry for her - she doesn't seem to adverse a real relationship. Maybe she can get a 'secret' caring lover in time, someone to keep her happy as a woman and not a Lady Empress. Riot is nice, wouldn't jeopardize her or X's esteem and seems kind. Paul is interesting too - indeed giving a nice variety. Picked by Hades, he must have extraordinary skills, be trustworthy and he is well-mannered. That's refreshing.

Lex - that IS cool. I like it and think the baby-fang will agree too :-)

Kudos and go on!
person AsyenMari
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kiix,
Mullethead?!? I adore Shade!!! Nice chappie, if a little short. I anticipate some insight into Hades' little rage as well as Claudius and Armor's reactions to X's hair. Do continue if you please.
Asyen