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person Cindyip
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, so X is a hybrid of some amazing sort:)
person k
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
X as deviant. Meanwhile he easily puts Sex to shame. Haley does everything in high gear, even growing - he ought to give Marcus lessons. I'm curious about the reunion at Lenny's. I'm pleading again: don't let Azrael the seer discard after his first time! Lenny doesn't deserve that.

Curious for the next chapter. Thank you for this! Go on!
person L
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I'm not exactly a prolific writer when it comes to reviews. In fact, this is the first one ever :) I simply felt that it was becoming increasingly impolite of me not to thank you for keeping me thoroughly entertained for the past few months. So, thank you very much and I look forward to reading more and more from you :)
person k
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a bit late but why is X meeting Lanseng and Marcus (the phantom I guess) at the opera? The two extra-hours for Azrael are a little to short for chello-classes and opera. Hmmm ... brooding
person Laur
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So ready to dance...So X has gps now...Coool!

So Britta knew that someone was killing of the werevolves and diddnt care. I wonder if she is employing someone like Haley said. I also wonder since Haley is the next leader after Britta why would she brand him? I cant wait to meet Britta. At the rate these chapters are going i do not know how this story is going to end. I cant forshadow it at all.

COME BACK LOYAL!!! WE NEED YAH!!!
More one liner comments to come in the future is my premonition.
person Cindyip
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, X what have you gotten yourself into now? (^_^)
person a.taste.of.insanity
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I'm glad I wasn't being completely stupid/oblivious when I noticed how it read 'Marcus' instead of 'Armor'.

I missed Shade, and those assignments. X did this assignment really well.. I'm proud of him, lol.

Nolan! Haha, I remember that guy. But I'm surprised how different he is. I mean, after the incident with X/Armor, you'd think the guy would quit his job and move somewhere far FAR away from any vampires. But here he is, acting as menacing as ever.

I hope it goes alright....



OH! And are we going to have a second X/Armor Jail Bunnies episode?
person a.taste.of.insanity
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh.. and we call it Victoria Day here. I think it's because Victoria's our capital and such.
person miles
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good chapter ! Can't wait for the next !
person shiden
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey,
read chap 119 and 120. I used to think that claudia was just trying to worm her way in the middle and be a bitch. but now i actually feel sorry for her. I can appreciate her prediciment a lot more now. Well im a claudia over vladmir supporter :) she should stay number 4. :P heheh.
when do we hear more about the chesterson and mr young penguin me guy :) heheheh i like that? and of course lenny. i think he is hot...
can't wait for hte next installment.