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person Laur
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I meant some and Rosemary sooo took my one liner but i wrote more instead.

I will say it now though:

Holy Shit Batman!!!
person Miharaz
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 30-

I love the irony that Xavier is back in the same room that he was in before in the police station... but the fact that they know about the white death thing sounds like trouble...
person Miharaz
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol! I love the sound effects. =P And i wonder if anyone is going to notice the new furrows in the floor =P I think i'll laugh myself silly if he ever gets arrested again and gets put in that room again...

Also i think its great that Hayley is getting more dominante (acting like Shade lol) cause those are the kinds of people that Xavier needs around him. Plus he's got Ping now too =P
person Rosei
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 31 Squeaksqueak Bangbang!

Love that title.
Yes! More plot, more sex!!
YES!
With the semester over and summer approaching
I actually went outside for a walk!!
I actually was away from my laptop for 5 hours!
(Others may also be experiencing the outdoors!)
Armour and X on the table at the police station! Wow!
A maturing, responsible Haley was a pleasant surprise.
Thanks!
R
person Spirit
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I owe you an apology—I am so sorry I haven’t reviewed recently!! My boyfriend came for a visit this weekend, and the week leading up was so packed with work I didn’t have a moment to myself. I’m still absolutely loving this story, there is NO way I’d stop reading it. Ever. (well, until it ends I suppose). It’s still great writing and I swear I wish I could write so much and keep the action going :)

Kudos && cookies for a great chapter!
So the 2:00 meeting is coming up next… Wonder how that’ll go.

~Spiritxx
person shiden
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey again.

loved the bunny action. :)
and puppy got a mention and he sounds like he is starting to mature. Ohhh that's soo cool.
can't wait for the next installment...
person Spirit
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PS. Penguining is seriously the best thing ever :)
person Lioncourt
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Squeaksqueak Bangbang" That has to be the most inspiring chapter title so far.^^
person Laur
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It took me a whole day to think a more appropriate comment to the silvery moon chapter!

Wow the police know where they lsitening into the conversation that the dude was having on the phone with X before he killed him. Or have they been scoping him. Or did Orel Wessel or the Hunters rat him out?

Damn Kiix your endings always leave me wanting the next chapter like ASAP!!!!
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! More grooves XD. I am trying to be a loyal reviewer! But I am in the process of moving, so I'm doing good if I even get a chance to read the newest chapter. As of tomorrow I will be -internet for a few days until it is hooked up at my new place. Never fear! I will review when its back ^^

DemonAkasha
XOXO