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Chap 32-

Oh God... Poor Xavier.... he's going to regret this so much when he 'wakes up'.

Chap 33-

-sniff, sniff- Poor Azrael.... he needs to stop doubting Marcus' love for him... I used to dislike Marcus but now i feel sorry for him... they need to get back together!

Ouch poor Az =(

oooh THAT IS HELLA GRIMY!!!!!!

MArcus loves X that is some grimy crap! man i would be pissed if that was me! I feel sorry for Az! He getting hurt so much!!!!

Oh Az, that can't be true. Marcus truly does love youT_T

Chapter 33 "Guilt"

What a way to end a chapter!
I'm flabbergasted! Marcus strikes again!
One straight to Azrael's heart!
(And on anther note. That boy needs a
bigger bed!)
Thanks,
R

Ah, you nver fail to twist the endings, do you? You brought tears to my eyes with this chapter!

Phantom of the Opera - I remember seeing that! It's really nice to watch... the effects are so amazing. I take it you've seen it too?

PS: Sorry for not being around for the last two chapters, I've been busy. But you're wonderful, and I don't see why your readership would go down, truthfully.

You are FOREVER my hero!

PS: I never knew that the Brothers look 19. I mean, they were sex on legs, but I never knew they looked young too.

Oh god, it was X ???? That's so sad. I need another box of tissues, again. What's the purpose?
Drinking from Liam makes a good explanation. Even better, now that Liam gives the brothers lessons about being 'The Phoenix'.
Poor X alone, he will have a lot of crying ahead and poor Sex will feel guilty again. Poor brothers - they need a vacation, too bad they are Lord Emperor.
Sometimes I don't get Liam but this chapter makes him almost human - almost. He retired to solitude for the sake of his honeybee but he wanted to come back stronger than Cillian. That's twisted and understandable and sad. The extrovert ex-Emperor has a big ego-problem. Maybe I like him a little bit too. I definetly like the way you develop him and his history. Gave he Hades advice to shield while he is dead and on the beach? I still dont understand that. Hades isn't overly obedient. At some point in 400 years he must have dropped his shield or can only the Emperors come to the beach and 'invite' others along and William refused Hades? On the beach he would have been stronger. Oh my, Liam has still a lot to make up for - with all the other Von Drachenfelds.

Good chapter, very important for the character-development. Moore please!

Poor Azrael ! Is the boy on the canvass really X ?