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person a.taste.of.insanity
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel a bit like Marcus after that piercing. SLACK JAWED.

That was such a sweet chapter... Marcus and Azrael are a bit like newlyweds right now. Sweet, though they can't keep their hands off each other.

I never thought I would see one of the Brothers NOT be able to hold one up. Hm..

Thanks for the nice break between all the horror. Oh, and thanks for the extra bit about the 'unidentified character'. I'm happy to learn that it's not happening yet!
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey!! what happened to Claudius?!?! i want to find out!! please update!!!
person shiden
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
enjoyed reading it. finally harold has come out!!!!
yay!!!

can i ask who is stronger an ancient or an alpha female lycan like the empresses brit(god i can't remember her name!) hayleys grandmother...
and what happened to hayleys parent;s?

thanks again!
person Jenna T.
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 42 - I think a: Awwwwwwwwwwww is in order. And here I was expecting Claudius to die. Aww. I love their nipple rings. So cute.
person Laur
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
not what i expected for when bloods collide but cute and sexy all the same. This chapter was cute. Why were Ping and Lanseng fighting again?

Rock on!
person Rosei
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 42 "When Bloods Collide..."

Good break from all the tenseness...
Not that the tenseness and angst could keep
me away... or the blood shed and death and
mayhem and forced sex and well, you know.
I don't mind a good cry, (or staying up all night
sharing in the angst of a character or worrying
that a certain character will be permanently
damaged). If I don't like it and/or it causes me emotional
pain and strife, I'll just yell at you then quickly
apologise and beg for your next chapter like the twisted
loyal fan that I am!
Thanks,
R

person k
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What happened? Why is the icing the last thing, Azrael remembered? I hope, he just passed out and it's not Alarik on the move. I can't handle Claudiud dying before the wedding.

Apropos wedding, will Haru-chan and Tommy attend the wedding together? It was nice of you to drop a hint here and there, you know I wanted them to become a couple and Haru pregnant. Man in that household everything get's done full speed. What's with good old waiting? And more girls to come, Claudia surely brings a few maidens of her own and the female lycans. The kindergarten-to be is growing very fast.

I like Sex's sweet attempts at being a nice and caring elder brother - so adorable. What does he do with X on the beach - they are both pretty ragged at the moment. Can they help each other?

Keep it up!
person Cindyip
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Az, he doesn't have time to play with his Babe.(^_^)
person Spirit
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 40 - Only finally just got through reading this, was interrupted last night. Some plot filling, but interesting. Azrael must feel so helpless though, with Claudius going after Alarik. I wonder if the next chappie's a confrontation between the two? I shall see about that very soon... ;)

~Spiritxx
person Spirit
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Last thing he remembered ? what ?? Way to go with such a cliffhanger, I mean, there was nothing ‘bad’ going on really. No assassination attempts sneaking up, no intrusion… unless of course we don’t know that yet, and you’re keeping us in the dark, and that’s just evil ;-)
Keep it up, can’t wait for whatever it is that’s after the cliffy.

~Spiritxx