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schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok if i understood corectly Haley is her only living relative.no??? so he was really special!!!how in God's name was she so stupid to do that hedious thing to him?? wasn't he her chosen one to be the alpha???

well i rimenber that some one had the idea to unite A with the soul eater sword. and you said that could be done because he would kill anyone he touched. but you are autheryou decide what will happen. you can for eg make it so that his power could only affect the enemies and leave the friends alone????it is just a suggestion.

ok i have a question when in x going to be stong enough???why can't he just grab Liam and mindewalk to gather experince like A did when he learned to play music????

are the Lycans going to find out the truth about x in this book???

any way this story that best story i have ever read in my entire life!!!!!!update soon please!!!!!

and if you can could you please answer me questions??? please!!!!!prety please!!!!!
person Yuusei6Roku
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really would've reviewed before this, but I'm always too lazy. So my first greetings to you, my dear author. This is, what, the third time I've read through your Lord Emperor series? If I read it more than once, it means it's really good and I really like it. The Lord of the Rings is a good example of that although I wouldn't compare your stories with those. Your stories are on a completely different level. I've only said this to one other author whose stories stole my heart, but you should get published. You may not hear from me often, but always know that I'm watching you... I sound like a stalker. ^^' I do believe my favorite charaters are Azrael, Vladamir, and Hades. I'm always going for the blood thirsty, cold hearted, psyco, etc. Sesshoumaru for example. I have actually abandoned my friends right now in favor to read your beautiful story and keep updated. Seirei's going to kick my ass when I get back on Gaia... ^^' Well, dear I must leave for now. Keep up the lovely work. Your smut is heavenly.
person shiden
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
calm before the storm
sounds like the end of the book is fast approaching,
this was an ever sweet chapter... but one that leads to foreboding i feel. i hope you dont kill of claudius that would be just too tragic!
thanks for answering my questin about hayley's parents.
i can't wait for the next installment. :)
person k
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(Sighing in relief ... for now) I'm glad, Azrael only seems to have exchanged with X. I love X & Armor and I love caring X!

The following statement from Armor I consider strange:

quote, '(...)That is when Father took him away. (...) My back had been cut to ribbons but it was I who woke up in Claudius’ bed while he was giving us a blood bath, healing all my wounds. I did not know what he was. I did not care what he was. He was mercy (...)” unquote.

With the following passage that makes it sound as if Claudius was giving Armor/Marcus a blood bath when he took him from the humans but Claudius rised him to the age of 26 before he offered the covenant.

Once again, please no Claudius-killing before the wedding. Triplets on the way, married to a gay Emperor, who can't refrain from engaging himself into all sorts of war and mayhem and the beloved father dead before or the day of the wedding - that's too much! Think of the little-wings!

However, love your writing! Go on!

BTW the freewebs site keeps telling, 'Sorry, but the page you have requested is temporarily unavailable. This page has probably been taken down and/or is not open to the public.'
person Anon
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Armor's porno star hair flip is just soooooo sexy!
person Jenna T.
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 43 - Fluff and sex. Damn. I know something bad is going to happen now. But aww. Armor and X still remain my absolute favorite couple...aside from Liam and Hades. Haha. Liam and Hades.
person AsyenMari
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kiix,
HAPPY SUMMER SOLSTICE!!!!! As usual, fantastic chapter--if a little short. Poor Sex, *grr I hope Alexander finally beats the shit out of his elder brother!!! Do continue pretty please!
Asyen
person Laur
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A short and sweet chapter and man...I cant wait for the next chapters and books. Kiix your awesome!
person Cindyip
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, is that why Marcus never really grew up before? Because he knew that Claudius needed him as a child and someone who is depended on him to survive, therefore Marcus never really had a reason to grow up. That Claudius needed to feel needed?(^_^)
person Spirit
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaah oh woahhhhh.


that's about all I can manage.
Amazing.

~Spiritxx