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for Vengeance Owned:Gabriel and Milo

by devilfancy

person AJ Andrews
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing! I'm so in love with it, I visit back every so often to see if there is an update but am always disappointed. Are we ever going to find out what happens to Gabriel and Milo?
person Anon
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes! You updated!!!AND about 4 times too!
I noticed the pace had a slower kick to it. That kinda made me fidgety,
however on aggregate it was compensated by the interesting plot: Which side will
come out on top? (no pun intended).

:D Loads of Support to You
~WR
person Qiana
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so hot I loved it
person Qiana
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this please let me know when you update.

qianawright@aol.com
person PCF
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update soon. :)
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Reven is several centuries old, like all the mythological creatures in my story.
He is still Lilith's boy boy though. Her youngest child, doted on and spoiled
rotten to the core.
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a bet??? that is cool. well i have a idea for an insult. Milo could call G. an over grown chicken.you can use it if you want.
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please don't get mad!!!

but could you put the answer to reviews. Not is the review section but inside the story???

just asking.please update soon.
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My GOD. SO good. <3<3 WRITE, WRITE, WRITE!
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
raping puppies??? *tears up* but there so sweet, you are a big ol meany Milo.....

This was purely Milo yanking Gabriels chain my dear. No puppies were even ogled, I swear.

How'd you come up with the names for these charcters? I know the common demon/angel names such as azrael, gabriel and balthazar but lilith and nicodemus? can i find actual reference for those or are they just your makings?


Its a combination of both actually. Milo is my own creation and I named him out of thin air. Gabriel is of course a common angel name. Balthazar is a demon in my story and I think youll find him listed amongst the fallen angels. As for Lilith, in mythology Lilith was Adams first wife. Created by God at the same time as Adam and made from the earth just as he was. The legend goes that when Adam tried to lord over Lilith that she refused. She would not always be on the bottom she said. As far as she was concerned they were equals and she would not be treated as a lesser being. After Adam kept trying to boss her around and force his will on her, Lilith ran away. Adam whined to God of course and God sent three angels to bring her back but she refused to come. So God cursed Lilith. She would bear hundreds of children but none save her oldest and youngest would live.

It was her punishment to have to watch as her children were slaughtered on the banks of what was forever after known as the RED Sea. Red with the blood of her children for all eternity. So Lilith made a deal with Lucifer. She would be his wife and bear him two sons in exchange for the power to wreak revenge upon man and God. She became a succubus and a killer of enfants in the night.

Lilith holds sway over the life of every mortal child for the first days of its life. Eight days for boys. Twenty days for girls.

When Lilith refused to come back to Adam, God made him a new companion. One fashioned from his rib to be a part of him and always weaker by virtue of not being created from the earth. Eve seemed perfect for Adam. Unfortunately it turned out that even though God had made her physically weaker than Adam, Eve still had a mind of her own. lol

As for Nicodemus, if you look in the bible you will find that the man sent to guard Jesus' tomb with Joseph of Arimithea was indeed named Nicodemus. As for the rest of the name, Ben means "son of" in Hebrew and Appollyon means "Satan". Therefore he is, Nicodemus Ben Appollyon, or Nicodemus son of Satan.

Reven is Reven Ben Appollyon or Reven son of Satan.

Reven is a name I made up, but not really.

As the bible says of the anti-christ, "And his name shall be NEVER and Hell shall follow him."

Reven = Never.

As for reference, yes there are tons about Lilith and some about Nicodemus.
I hope Ive answered your questions.
Thank you for reviewing.

DF