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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looking good, can't wait to read the next chapters!
Spirit
Spirit
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!
Not a one shot!
How about a 10 shot?!
R
Not a one shot!
How about a 10 shot?!
R
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice as usual sad itts just a one shot id like to knoow what happens to hans a very enjoyable story
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh. Intriguing.
I like the way this story is unfolding. So this dude guy man beleives that he can remold Hans into something he wants. It will be cool if Hans could play it off and then be completly free in the world.
Question?
Hans was sex trafficked into the Brothel or was given away?
I like the way this story is unfolding. So this dude guy man beleives that he can remold Hans into something he wants. It will be cool if Hans could play it off and then be completly free in the world.
Question?
Hans was sex trafficked into the Brothel or was given away?
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG this story is so good the only bad bit is that there not more to read. I WANT MORE!!!
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very erotic - breaking Hans and owning him completely in order to set him free.
But just what does Master think free is??
Hope the muse inspires you to write more. (You certainly inspire your readers to want more!)
But just what does Master think free is??
Hope the muse inspires you to write more. (You certainly inspire your readers to want more!)
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hope you keep this one going. so far its different and still interesting to read especially since you are starting to develope each characters history or personality. please continue.
aurora
aurora
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story.
I like it so far. So Hans is going to be an educated whore for this dude and that it?
I like it so far. So Hans is going to be an educated whore for this dude and that it?
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Kiix - I know to expect good stuff from you. And this is very, very good.
I do hope you'll consider taking it past a one-shot. (Since you didn't let Hans kill himself.) I'd really like to know more about Hans and Cedric, and the relationship they develop.
I do hope you'll consider taking it past a one-shot. (Since you didn't let Hans kill himself.) I'd really like to know more about Hans and Cedric, and the relationship they develop.
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yah Baby!
Love it.
It's hot!
Thanks!
Wow! I just blew through your "BLACK TOWER"
and "What a great story!" Thanks!
Love it.
It's hot!
Thanks!
Wow! I just blew through your "BLACK TOWER"
and "What a great story!" Thanks!