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for I was His

by kiix

person Angela
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More please ^_^

That was hot...in a dark angsty way...am i even making sense? -_-;;;;

person k
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More please! I wonder where this leads.
person BlackOpal
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that this isn't just a oneshot anymore!!! :) I think the "degree" of freedom is really interesting and can't wait to see how everything turns out!
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I DON'T UNDERSTAND. hans is an adult now why he still has to be a slave. why is he not free. bucause his uncle liad????i love it please update soon.
person Spirit
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is great. There MUST be more!

Sorry I'm not up to writing a more detailed review.
I'm being overwhelmed by 'real life' and your stories, all of them, really help me escape for a moment. Thanks for that *hug*

xxSpirit
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow more please luving this thanks 4 continueing
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please more
person Selena
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, i really like this new story of yours, i really hope you continue writing!
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was supposed to be a oneshot?? No way! Hans arrives to a new Master and then it was supposed to end? Not acceptable! ^^

I feel that, perhaps, this fic needs a couple of side-plots. Just to fatten up the story a bit. Other than that: very promising. I'm anxious to read more one-on-one encouters between Hans and Cedric. And what does Summer look like, by the way?
person Laur
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yea another chappie!

Oooooh poor hans.