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pleeeeease continue this story!! i like the way it's heading and i defenitely want to read more:)

Greeeeat update!!! I loved it!!
Thanks for updating! 'cause this story is really interesting! ^^
I like how things are going!...and I can't wait for more!! n_____n

Lovely, lovely chapter.

I'm so glad you bowed to pressure ;))

It's good to see Cedric soften up a bit. And to know Summers' background. I may end up thinking Cedric is a good guy...

You really like to make people cry. Please go on with this story, it's to lovely to be finished at this stage. Beside this "Caramel" yummi.
So happy, you write!

great chapter!!!

but well somthing is strange. in the second chapter is this passage "After the first month, I gave him the option of sleeping alone or with me and I made it clear that with me, meant WITH me." So herry was give an option to sleep alone.why didn't he take it?

is it because some how he began to love C.?

The silver collar means freedom or slavery?

why is he are not allowed to touch himself? and then the ending clause. "He was almost mine". some how i think that C might even love him deep inside more then he think and by not allowing herry to touch himself. wants to make H to dependent of him.i am right? he would rather have him aS a lover and not a son.

i like the words "very lion was once a cub". so that means the C was once a cub, a "whore". and because he was once in herry place that is why wants to help him, because he know what he feels. and because some one helped him, no?

love this chaper.but i don't know couldn't invent so break through of sience and give him his eye back?????you are good at inventing things.

This is really great! Well written and with interesting characters. Hope it keeps going.

Wow, that's one hell of an ultimatum. Very intriguing, please continue!

OMG!! Please write more of this!! I just LUUUUUUVE it!!
And I want to know what will happen between them next! >_____<
I'm so curious! ^^ lol

Thanks for the story!! *hugs*

i love it. i think i understand. he vis really free but mr.C. keps him as a slve to help him recover to be like he was at first. if he would have been let free herry would have killed him self,no?please update soon.

So many questions.... they need to be answered! :D
Good writing, I don't want Hans to go completely blind. although that'd be an interesting twist.

xxSpirit