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Chapter 6 "He Is"

Oh! This is so dark and delicious!!!

Completed?! Really?! Really?

Thanks!
R

Very intriguing and interesting. I really love this story, and I think it would make a great movie. Mega kudos. :3

this was a lot different then what i'm use to reading but wonderful. it's really a tear jerker. i hope it isn't finished yet but even if it is that's a good way to end it as well.

Whoa. So dark, but I really liked it. Go little cub and become that Lion. Rawr!

You so rock kiix.

Looking forward to more. Please.

*switches to reading "Caramel"*

Hello, I just found this story and for somethig you meant to be a one-shot has certainly grown. Even though this is meant to be a dark-fic I can still see some tenderness within it. Cedric trying to help these children of pleasure find life once again, perhaps the way he does is harsh but with what they have endured it is a necessary hardship maybe to help them learn to walk again. . . one must crawl first right? You give enough history to make the reader care for Hans. If you decided to stay with your original idea and keep this as a long one-shot or very short story, as it is now, than it leaves much to the imagination of Hans chances to find life again, but if you decide to continue on with it; as I would love to see you do, than I will certainly keep my eyes open for more from this story and you. Your storytelling style is very imaginative and really draws a reader in, you have great character development as well. I will most certainly be looking for more of your work. Thanks for sharing your story with everyone.

Wow........what a powerful story.
I adored it.

thank you

Hans has a tough row to hoe
and luckily he's got a couple
of people who understand and care
enough to help him.
Very hard on ole Hans...

(Oh, thanks for beginning CARAMEL!)
R

Ooooooh... intriguing.
So Hans is Cedric's.. but is Cedric Hans's?
hmm

btw, like the idea of staying with the C's for for my favorite vampire story. Who is caramel going to be though? another change of X/Az/Sex's?...(eagerly waiting to find out!)

Great writing, as per usual,

xxSpirit

thank for your answers.

something tells me, Summers was also o broken spirit.

any way i love it update soon.

they was just awsome!, i cant wait for the next chapter. Its just wonderfully twisted and sweet at the same time.