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March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First off, thank you for the e-mail notification.
Now on to the review:
The plot thickens! I am loving the sexual tention between the both brothers. I also like the fact that you are not having the brothers jump each other. It is so hard to find a story, like this one, where the plot has time to develope. I can't wait to read more!
Sincerely,
~rAiNwAtEr~
Now on to the review:
The plot thickens! I am loving the sexual tention between the both brothers. I also like the fact that you are not having the brothers jump each other. It is so hard to find a story, like this one, where the plot has time to develope. I can't wait to read more!
Sincerely,
~rAiNwAtEr~
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March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You aren't seriously thinking of abandoning thsi story anymore, are you? ARE YOU? ... o_Ox Nvm.
I mean, you can't, because it's awesome! I wouldn't have minded if it had been a pwp either, but plot makes the porn so much more delightful, doesn't it? ^^;;
Anyway, doesn't sound like "Dad called" is a good thing. Would "I want you. Sexually." have been better? XD
You deserve better than this review, but past midnight it's all you get. -_-x You're a great author though! ^_^x
I mean, you can't, because it's awesome! I wouldn't have minded if it had been a pwp either, but plot makes the porn so much more delightful, doesn't it? ^^;;
Anyway, doesn't sound like "Dad called" is a good thing. Would "I want you. Sexually." have been better? XD
You deserve better than this review, but past midnight it's all you get. -_-x You're a great author though! ^_^x
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March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god... of COURSE it's going to end in a cliff hanger like that X3 Now I'm gonna be camping out until you update. Mutter mutter, etc.
But oh man. EVERY time I read this story, it makes me hungry...
But oh man. EVERY time I read this story, it makes me hungry...
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March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it and need more of it! If you can, send me an e-mail when you update at: justice02908@yahoo.com
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Stating out awesome, can't wait to see how the two of them work it out. :D
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Im liking this story a lot.
The storyline is very original, (ive never seen the whole 'brother on brother' thing done like this before)...its also kinda sick...but thats not always a bad thing in the world of slash, is it? ;)
Looking forward to an update.
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The storyline is very original, (ive never seen the whole 'brother on brother' thing done like this before)...its also kinda sick...but thats not always a bad thing in the world of slash, is it? ;)
Looking forward to an update.
L
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
jhgdansudaig why have I not already replied to this.
Write more. I am enjoying it greatly.
Also, I am hungry now. Thanks.
Write more. I am enjoying it greatly.
Also, I am hungry now. Thanks.
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hm ... that was ... really something!
Wow, a very GOOD chapter 1. A wicked idea - the younger brother being the more aggressive one! And the 1st person POV allows us to see only side of the story ... I so wonder what Jason thinks about what had happened ^__^
All in all ... I will be reading on!
Wow, a very GOOD chapter 1. A wicked idea - the younger brother being the more aggressive one! And the 1st person POV allows us to see only side of the story ... I so wonder what Jason thinks about what had happened ^__^
All in all ... I will be reading on!
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
why do you have to beat my at everything! writing supposed to be my part, not yours! -runs away crying- i sick susej on you!
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm... HMMMMMM... I like this!!! and that is an understatement! :D
Laaerie
Laaerie