rate_review Reviews

oooommmmggggg PLEASE UPDATEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good! Please keep going

I really like this story! I can't wait for your next update!

I think that this story has a nice start to it.
I don't find Ben to be that creepy..
If he's the new kid, and asked about someone, then he wouldn't
want to come off as creepy. Imogene just wasn't supposed to find out.
Write more soon!

aww come on don't do that i loved this so far and wish you would write more it has a very good begining

You can't stop, I like it and can't wait for more. I see a possibility for great story.

It's rare for me to find a story where I'm truly upset to get the end of just the first chapter...

Since there is only one chapter of this story, I can't really leave a review saying much more than this story seems like it may have a lot of potential. Life has a way of throwing the creative process off, but I hope that you don't completely abandon what could be a really interesting and intriguing story.

More words of encouragement I cannot offer at the moment. The only thing I can suggest is to put the story aside for a while and come back to it later -which helps me sometimes, but everyone has a different method for getting around writer's block.

This seems like it could be very interesting. Please update soon.