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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!! That was great! I can't wait to see how this will turn out. heh~
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww!
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March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 3
Jake is jelous, hehe. Can't wait to find out about how his date is going to progress. He seem to like Shun better than Ashley.
Jake is jelous, hehe. Can't wait to find out about how his date is going to progress. He seem to like Shun better than Ashley.
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O I want to know what happened too...*big puppy eyes* plz... one day a clif is going to kill some readers
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so just reviewing so you'll update. Hope ya know that. Anyhow... interesting beginning. I already love the little brother Jessi.
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok... the start is good, and don't get me wrong, but WHOA you have to proofred this... :D It makes me curious about the development :D so don't take it as an offense (about the proofreading) because if you clean this up a bit, it would flow so much better :D
Laaerie
Laaerie
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! EMO-NINJA!!! Best thing ever. lol hehe. I'm really liking this I can't for the next update!!!!
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe. I've been to FYE it does suck your wallet dry. -smirks- I hope you continued to write! It's quite amusing hehe.
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wait...what...i am intrigued....