schedule
March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
T.K., thanks for that.
I was REALLY hoping someone would give me some feedback like that.
Then I know how to improve myself.
I actually just recently took the second chapter down, as I'm simply displeased with it, and I'll be editting it for the next few hours before I decide to put it back up.
I was REALLY hoping someone would give me some feedback like that.
Then I know how to improve myself.
I actually just recently took the second chapter down, as I'm simply displeased with it, and I'll be editting it for the next few hours before I decide to put it back up.
schedule
March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm interesting. i look forward to reading more.
schedule
March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it! So write more! ;)