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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually, those commas are fine where they are. People have different Voices, and commas are really flexible when it comes to fiction.
Now, to the story! I really enjoyed it, the innocent-whore character is really cute. :) Keep up the good work! Poor Geno's. :(
I want to see more! :D
Now, to the story! I really enjoyed it, the innocent-whore character is really cute. :) Keep up the good work! Poor Geno's. :(
I want to see more! :D