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hi, i was wondering if u were planning on continuing this?

pls pls pls update?! i heard u had jack planning to come back so i assume u hv stuff written? reminder! update! even tho its been forever. im in <3 with this story.

A very interesting concept. update soon.

I recently stumbled upon this story and am sad that it hasn't been updated in so long. It's a well written, well thought out story (in my opinion) and I hope it continues by the author some day. I find Jack's character interesting and irresistible. I haven't reread any of the chapters yet so I don't know if I missed anything, but I get the feeling that Talia is missing something rather crucial about Jack. My imagination should keep me well entertained :) Hoping the author is well and a Happy New Year, Jabberwocky.

PLEAS UPDATE SOOON. I really want to now what happens with Talia and Jack! What has happened between Elise and Brevin? This story is so good. I LOVE IT
I am looking forward to whatever you write…….

Pleas don’t stop writing this story !!!

Jack give him back. Or just finish the story. (she says with much hope)

I love this. The smut scenes with Jack are very hot. Plus your story is well written and intriguing, I wasn't expecting it to be this compex when I read the summary. But I like that, I like how your plot develops and how you describe Talia's emotions and her confusion. I miss Jack too lol.
I'm curious to know, now that she's finally dating Brevin will she give it up to him like she was planning or will she give it up to Jack, when he reappears in this story? Those kind of questions make for an interesting, and frustrating read..especially since you haven't updated in awhile!
I'm definitely wondering where this story will go. I'm sure whatever you do with it it'll still be a great read.
-Cara

WOW! i accidentally stumbled on this site and your story and I love it! the whole dark and mysterious thing is so hot and i love the whole "war torn future" thing! update soon cause now that i know your story exists i'm gonna be lookin for an update.

dont keep us fans waiting too long. update soon please!

awesome, awesome, awesome! i am seriously in love with your story, and yeah, your right, it does kinda have a dark angel thing going on...minus the superpowers of course. haha. can't wait for an update