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for Forbidden Fruit

by kasin

person webber
schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i know it's been a few years, but is there going to be any more? i loved it
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
more more more more please its been forever.
person livelifelovehgdm
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I defiantly loved this story, it was very sexy. I really hope you manage to update soon, I will be looking out for the new chapter :D
person speachestx
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have to update soon. I just have to know what happens between Molly and Morris's dad.
person NICK
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man I was hoping you were gonna write more of her and the father and son doing her at the same time or experimenting with her since she's only six years old. I was hoping you were gonna have her learn how to suck cock....I'd rather read that then what you plan with the M/M. Just some suggestions. So far I like the fic. I hope you take my suggestions with the six year old. You should get her brother involved since she's now experienced it. update soon please
person LOVELUST
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First off the writing is great. The sex is really hot. Its devastating that the person is so young and Molly really doesn't want this to happen to her. She doesn't no matter how much her body responds to it, it really hard to control things that respond naturally to such stimulation. I would like to read more though...its just fiction.
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you continued the story I really enjoy reading it. And, that was a twist you threw in there but was expected with the dad and Molly... lol And, i loved it! I can't wait for more!!! Update soon please...
person Shyao
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Finally a new chapter! Will they both get the chance to do Molly again? She may be a bit young but no chance of them double teaming her is there? I hope she keeps coming back to Samuel at least!
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading all of your fics and you may very well be the best Loli and Shouta author alive. I hope to see more from you.
person Anon
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon ^_^