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for And Then, They Fell in Love

by WisdomofMoo

schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if Osamu's unstable... he sure knows how to apologize though. Kounji was right, he does like Sara. I bet he is fascinated by her nerve to stand up to him in public and I think he considers her a challenge. Don't worry about the sex scenes... sometimes, some stories are even better when there is no sex at all. It's all in the way one writes. A smart, good dialogue or a well written kiss can sometimes be sexier than a whole sex scene... of course that is my opinion. Great update, keep it up and let us know what happens next.
person khia
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww!....i love it kepp writin ........
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, a rival!!! *evil grin* Hurry up and update soon, please! I have to know what's next!
person khia
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey plz update ........




person khia
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it ........can't wait for the nxt chapter..plz update soon!

person patty
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this sory...please post a new chapter soon..
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter... I can't wait for the next one! Hurry up, please!
person Nosfiss
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this a lot! Probably something to do with the fact that I'm totally into Japan at the moment... Anyways, the beginnig sounds very good, so do us favour and update soon cause really looking forward to it. Cheers!
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooh it's perfect... it's sweet and I predict veeeery hot situations coming soon... please update soon!
person Loopypants
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what happens next!