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for And Then, They Fell in Love

by WisdomofMoo

person whitknee
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH NO!! you're writing the same ending as last time aren't you???? T___T now i don't want to keep going... but.. but.. i want to read more... awwww you're horrible!! you write too well....
person Sessh's Sango
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't you dare kill off Osamu. I will cry so hard if you do, and I'd be distracted all through final exams. And yes, we are still in school right now. We have 3 more days of finals. Anyways, other than the fact that you WILL kill off Osamu, me being so perceptive and recognizing this and all, great job on the story.
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pleeeeeese....i'm on my knees and begging....enough with the cliffhangers they are killing me lolit is all fantastic so far hun and brilliantly written too but for the love of everything holy update soon!!!! lol
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I really like Caleb! He's so silly, bless him! He's my favourite!
About the blog and the interview... I don't have a problem with them... I really don't have a lot of time to get online though, because of the nature of my work, but I'll read it when I get connected. :)
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update!!! Reading it, I didn't know who to actually feel more for... Osamu or Ken? Difficult positions they both have... the airport scene was priceless! :)
I hope you didn't have trouble with the tornado...
person Sessh's Sango
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are my hero! I absolutely adore this story and I demand that you write more chapters immediately! lol Not to order you around or anything. :P I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Christi
person Sayge
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dear god~! I believe that if you don't update soon I'll die of this relentless feeling of suspence!!
I love EVERYTHING about this fanfiction. It's amazing. I was actually looking for something just like this. It was exactly what I needed! I didn't think I'd find something so exact to what I wanted to read tonight. There are a few grammar mistakes, but the storyline...it's amazing! It's not like one of those dramatic stories you see that are so idiotic there's no way it could be real. I can really relate to many of the situations in this story with my boyfriend. This is something that people can really relate to. You're an amazing writeer. Please continue! <3
person Tirch
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read this from beginning to end the first time, and loved it. But you've really improved, both in writing style and in mood. I think I'm loving it even more the second time through.
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, they really are meant for each other...
Osamu's popularity must be a burden to both siblings... I feel for both of them, especially for little Ken. He is still young to understand that the whole situation is troubling Osamu as well.
I'm also glad that Tani and Sarah get along.
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They were both really sweet, being nervous in their intimate moments. I love the fact that Sara is so accepting of Osamu and I hope that he'll relax a bit more about his constant fear of hurting her... although I can understand him... it's not that easy, let alone being a child prodigy and having all this attention drawn to you...
I love the title you have now, very much... it's very romantic... it's like describing all the agonies and troubles they both go through to be together and after all that... they fall in love...