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for And Then, They Fell in Love

by WisdomofMoo

person SacredLingerie
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey- I'm a new reader and honestly this is a wonderful story. Although I was pretty upset that Osamu died, I felt it made it even more romantic... and it was fitting. It was beautiful and a bittersweet read. I look forward to the last two chapters. :)
person Sessh's Sango
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Although I am rather distraught about Osamu's death, I really think that you have done a wonderful job with this story. It doesn't take a lot to make me cry over a character's death, but there has to be at least a good plot line, which you have accomplished. Great job with the story so far, and keep it up. Thanks for putting so many details into this story; it's helped me to learn about a lot of different things that I had no clue about. Keep up the good work with this one,
Christi
person whitknee
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story last time and i still love it this time... T__T doesn't make me any less sad to see Osamu die though... T__T I love your writing and would love to read more of osamu and sara.... and the epilogue... (will it have baby osamu?)
person Silver Angeliss
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hated reading about Osamu's passing but as they say, everything happens for a reason. I'm definitely not going to yell or cuss at you for taking this direction. I love this story exactly as it is. Looking forward to the last few chappies!
P.S. Oneshots based around the story and a soundtrack would be awesome.
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha, somebody's angry at her reviewers =D Personally, I like sad endings. Happy endings are so... unrealistic.
Keep up the great work, I'm looking forward to the last 2 chapters. And as for the one-shots, I'd probably read
them just 'cuz I get bored a lot.
--Radgar
person dark.kagome
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im sorry to say that even though you write very good that im am disappointed and that i dont really like this you have great skill you just not my type of genre i hate sad endings so im going to stop reading now sorry that i cant keep reading i wanted to but i cant when you write a story with a happy ending email me
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg are you serious I've been with this story sinse day one,loved it!!! and then he has to die why must everyone die can we like have a surprise I mean these story where everyone die in the the in wth.why must you do that??!?!?!? but still good story!
person dark.kagome
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE HELL YOU CANT END THIS STORY LIKE THAT ITS IN THE ROMANCE SECTOIN IF YOU WHERE PLANNING TO END IT LIKE THIS YOU SHOULD HAVE SAID SO CUZ I WOULDNT HAVE CONTINED TO READ THIS AND GET SO IN IT I HATE DEPRESSING ENDINGS I HAVE ENOUGH PROBS IN MY LIFE I DONT NEED TO READ MORE!!!! YOU BETTER NOT END IT LIKE THIS!!!!
person whitknee
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAHHHHH!!! T______T you did it again!!! *sobbing* *sniffle* more please *sobs*
person WeepingAngelOfDeath
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO! He better not die. I got tears reading that last bit and if he dies....That'll just suck balls hardcore.

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