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for Into the West

by Finnel

person HallowsEve
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yayaya your not dead! I was worried because you where not posting.
so yay your back,the info you posted about the "princes" has helped heaps and the little info before the story helps too.
I really like the story and can't wait to see what happens when they are all in a room together. Still later hopefully not forever.
-HallowsEve
person HallowsEve
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes it was perfect, thank you.
i love this story it's only started but i can't wait to see what will happen keep up the good work.
-HallowsEve
person HallowsEve
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love you work but get a little lost with all the names could you maybe write the name and who they are before your next chapter so i have some where to go when i get lost on who is who please.
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
By the way. To make a bigger point of how damned good this story is, I was at the store last night, and... When I read a story, I don't remember it later as words. I remember it as pictures. (Which would explain why I read a lot, but have horrid spelling, and composition) Images from your story, (Which that's another thing. Only the stories I really like leave mental images that last. Mediocre stuff fades after a small while) flitted through my mind, and I suddenly thought, "I'm going to be sitting in the car waiting for who knows how long. Why didn't I bring that book?" Then I remembered. "Oh yeah... It wasn't. Damn..." Seriously good. I rank you up with my favorite fantasy authors, Terry Goodkind, and David Eddings. I Eagerly await the next chapter. *bows humbly then skips away*
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ACK!!!! This story is made of pure magnificence! And seriously. You make cliff hangers of absolute doom!!! I do so pray you are updating this story, and eagerly await the next chapter. *dances about in anticipation*
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An interesting story so far. What will become of our avenging heroine? Inquiring minds want to know.

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