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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love finding well-written things out there. You've really created a tangible world, here, and the little details are wonderful. I would love to see more of this. Fantastic job.
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww the poor creature. I can't wait to see how the plot develops. Keep up the exelent work! xxx
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March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I still don't think a eunuch would be all that hot for sex - but definitely for caring and gentleness. I'm sure Vrai snuggled closer...
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like such futurist stuff, and the story is interesting, but you could make it more of a story, a bit more details and insights into the minds of characters.
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How come the eunuch sex slave has such a wild sex drive? He sure doesn't have the necessary hormones...
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March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, greckin ,
This is an excellent first chapter.
Welcome, glad to have a new slash writer here:)
Wery well written, I can see the good plot already. Wish you had a bit of description on Vrai and his owner, I can't visualise them really. What sort of a name is 'Vrai', is it an abbreviation? Since he is not considered a person?
Lovely start, greckin, hope to see more from you:)
This is an excellent first chapter.
Welcome, glad to have a new slash writer here:)
Wery well written, I can see the good plot already. Wish you had a bit of description on Vrai and his owner, I can't visualise them really. What sort of a name is 'Vrai', is it an abbreviation? Since he is not considered a person?
Lovely start, greckin, hope to see more from you:)
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March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it. His name is Truth? I really like how dead inside, Vrai seems. Like he's completely given up on emotion. It's a nice change from the typical slave persona found in so many of the stories on this site. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow - Dark and Devilish. (Delicious...)
But little Vrai has some spirit left. Is there hope for him?
But little Vrai has some spirit left. Is there hope for him?