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for Seedling

by FoneBone

schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really great story!! Woah!!!
person Han
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
all i can say is......WHOA!
person FoneBone
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is basically a ripoff of http://www.asstr.org/~lostboy/OtherAuthors/FieldWork1.html
That one was kind of hot, but handicapped by a terribly juvenile writing style.
I tried to turn it up a notch, and write the story that I wanted to read. Tentacle sex _should_ be dark. It may be pleasurable, but it sure-hell ain't pleasant...
person Kawanee
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting... Well written and to me, imaginative. Make him go back for another!! Mwah ha ha ha ha..
Any way this is the first.. tentacle... tree sex thing I've read. Pretty cool!

Ummm are we going to hear about the seedling? Will he go back and see it? Too bad he can't bring a cutting home to play with like... little shop of horrors only with sex.

You get the point I liked it! update?
person Nboulet
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Imaginative and wonderfully erotic.
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! That was great in that weird-I-can't-believe-I'm-enjoying-this-type-of-way! ;o)Very original and I sure hope you write more.