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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...I liked that.
No spelling or grammatical errors, which is an extra bonus. The way you wrote it matched the flow and tempo of the story. And the first-person perspective was a nice touch.
Excellent job! Keep up the great work!
No spelling or grammatical errors, which is an extra bonus. The way you wrote it matched the flow and tempo of the story. And the first-person perspective was a nice touch.
Excellent job! Keep up the great work!