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schedule
June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This isn't bad, just check your grammer, spelling and capitals. THis would make a better song than a poem though.
schedule
June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the review. I get that alot actually i guess my work can be used as a way to explain things for some people.
schedule
May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I followed through from your review, and read this, and it's awesome. Yes it is. 'minds me of someone I used to know.
schedule
March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another great story you got here that's pretty dark and raw and just plain incredible!