rate_review Reviews

What a beautiful story...and very well written

I am glad to hear such positive reviews. And by the way things are sounding the audience (or at least two people) are getting those complicated emotions that I was trying to get across to the reader. since I have re-reviewed the story many times by now I don't get the reaction any more but when I first wrote this I did cry a little. I put a lot of effort into this and I am glad it shows

I hardly ever review...but I felt like I had to write a line or two after reading your story.
The amazing detail you seem to effortlessly weave into your story, does not at all make it boring or difficult to read (which is what seems to happen in my stories if I am not extra careful...). In your story the detail is more like a fast flowing river that draws the reader further in. Great work! You seem a natural story teller and I hope I get to read some more of your stories soon!

I was actully quite surprised when I read in your profile that you took some stories off aff.net because you felt they were not that good? Or did I get that wrong?

that was beautiful.
i thought it was just going to be like the usual one-shots but you pleasantly surprised me. the foreplay was sexy, very hot. i can only imagine how much hotter the love making would have been. i was a little disappointed that it didn't happen but the way you ended the story made up for it. because it was about more than just sex, and i really enjoyed that. the ending was really touching, corny i know but true. you wrote this story well and i hope there will be more to come from you.
-cara

Your story really touched me. I too know how it is to love someone I can never have. I am in love with a happily married man and I know he loves me too, but we had to stop things because we know its wrong. Being together was just torture because we knew we could never take that next step. So I can really identify with your story. I am almost in tears. Great job.