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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Seperated so soon. That's so mean. I hope his brother's alive and his brother's lover too. I still want to know more about those two. Their story sounds really interesting and worht hearing.I'll Stop rambling now. And Please bring Naruhito home to Breannan soon.
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more, please can i have more? :op
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Freakin' awesome!!!!
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying the story. Both main characters are engaging and I'm rooting for them and hoping desperately for Breannan's brother's to get the crap kicked of them. The one thing that sometimes jars is the setting. I love japan, and Scotland, and I'd be the first cheering for a fun blend of cultures with this. At the same time, I think that sometimes the little bits that don't fit the culture stand out more and detract a bit from the story, at least for me. The writing and dialogue is nicely smooth, however, so my brain's pretty happy to ignore the little bits that went against the cultural normas in favor of a the nice story. I am most definitely looking forward to more.
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They finally did it! I was a bit surprized with Breannan's sudden submissiveness.. I hope its not a lie.. But poor him.. Naruhito is going for battle the next morning and he doesn;t even know ..Gosh he'll be so devastated then... I like their father.. he is so caring and open
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 9
That was hott! I didn't expect that happen so soon, but, wow, definetely enjoyed this chapter:)
Kaemon and Yasunari Tadaaki are an interesting couple. I wish that their story had more detail. Pretty good so far.
That was hott! I didn't expect that happen so soon, but, wow, definetely enjoyed this chapter:)
Kaemon and Yasunari Tadaaki are an interesting couple. I wish that their story had more detail. Pretty good so far.
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting for this since your last update. I'm so happy you decided to add this chapter. Can Wait for the rest of the rest of the story. Keep it up. You're doing an awesome job.
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so sweet.... At least the little Scott had thought some stuff over during his stay at the temple.. At least he loved the love he had at the moment.. I sure do hope they will progress soon! More please!
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the miracle of prayer
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm gland they are both going back! ;) This chapter ended kinda abruptly, but I wont complain since you did post something! :P