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I'm really enjoying this story and I'm glad to hear it's almost finished. Many good stories are abandoned by their writers. So, good for you! Dedication is an important quality.

Still awesome. Please keep going.

YES!!!! Thank you!! Please don't let them die now, PLEASE!!! They're so sweet, and I think if one died the other would too, especially since Kaemon only went there for Yasunari. I KNEW they weren't dead!!!

Hmm... Me happy. Now can we get Naruhito back to Breannan? Safe and alive?

Love this fic!

Alania XXX

Yay, they're ALIVE!! :oD I really couldn't remember what happened at this point when I last read the story, so I was waiting just as impatiently as everyone else to find out what would happen with Kaemon and Yasunari. So happy that they're alive (at least for now...;o)). Anyway, a couple of small things I noticed, like where I think you said something about how the inside of his "neck" felt ripped and torn, where I think "throat" might be a better word, because for a second I thought he had been wounded on his neck! Scary! :oP And where he's putting the needle away, you said, "back in his back," which made me look twice. Maybe you meant "pack"? Because putting it in his back would be a little painful! ;o) So, those are just a couple of things I noticed that had me a little confused as I was reading. Can't wait for the rest!

When I read this last night I was half asleep so i couldn't leave you areview. This chapter was good. I glad that Keamon and his lover are alivre albeit barely but there's a chance they might me save. You're going to save them, right? You better. And please update quickly. I want to know what's going to happen to Naruhito and his little bride.

Your good at war stuff huh? It very detailed..NIce chapter... Its great that Yasunari and Kaemon is alive.. Looking forward to the next chapter!

please update soon!!! I need to read what happens next...:)

This is a really good story. Please update soon!

I've been gone awhile and missed like 4 chapters but caught up tonight! I'm glad Breannon and Naruhito finally did it!

Now you went for the heartbreak of them being seperated... AND the possible death of a brother and his lover? OOOOOhhhhhh you are soooo mean!

Keep writing! I'm anxiously awaiting the next installment!

nooooooooooooooooo.... find him find him!!!! so Naruhito can go back to breannan, and so we can have happy happy smut!!!!! ANyway, wow, so they are at the battlefield, scary~~~~ amputees... are fine... blood... looks cool over snow... :D Kaemon MUST be alive!!! he MUST!! :D OK now I leave hteir lives (and smut) in your dear hands, while waiting for another update!

Laaerie